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Hephzibah06 10/16/11 . chapter 13
Good angst trilogy thus far. I'm off to read the next.
Radon65 2/9/10 . chapter 2
My only problem right now is that suddenly everyone's a little evil? Moody and everything? I think Snape is now being a little bit excessively victimized. Just saying. Good descriptions, but this story format is starting to bug me.
Radon65 2/9/10 . chapter 1
The format for this chapter was a bit mucked up, but it didn't distract too much. It's nice to have the trio talking again. Good description of the grassy area.
snarky Beth 2/18/08 . chapter 13
WOW! That scene was amazing! Severus is really powerful, that was a great scene. Voldemort is a sick, disgusting, perverted, twisted bastard! I really like readin Remus and Severus's new friendship, it's so fun to read, it's funny. Dumbledore and Severus share a father and son relationship that is so stong. Now that I've read this stroy, I know how Severus met Jeffery Burnes, I like your character alot. Amazing story, I'm going to read and review the sequel tomorrow!
cckeimig 8/29/07 . chapter 13
Hi, sorry the reviews are so scarce...I've been saving pages to read offline on my laptop and am getting in the habit of not being able to review.

Anyhow BRILLIANT work on these stories. The fight in the Great Hall was amazing, to say the least, although we KNOW old Voldie will hear of Sev demolishing those 13 Death Eaters rather than helping them...
Laume 8/12/05 . chapter 10
Great story. Love it how you have Jeffrey Barnes and the Headmaster annoy poor Sevvy to no end with their cute ducks, kittens and happy faces.

You'd almost think he'd fear cuteness more then Voldemort...
futagoakuma-tenshi01 10/19/04 . chapter 13
Liked the part with Harry and Severus...
b7-kerravon 5/3/04 . chapter 13
I have now read this chapter over a dozen times 'sigh'...what a way with words! I adore the description of Snape as he fights the death eaters...
Shizuka Eien 10/22/03 . chapter 13
Continue!
Moonlight Evil 8/1/03 . chapter 13
Oh good story,

Keep writing,

M.MOONY
samson 2/22/03 . chapter 13
that last chapter was brilliant, although i did enjoy it all.
kagemusha 2/2/03 . chapter 13
Very nice way to describe Sev! Avatars of old, haven't heard that one before. Great job writing! Nice story, good ending. You didn't make it completely uniformly heroic like most authors overdo. Great!
kagemusha 2/2/03 . chapter 8
Nice use of sev's skills, letting the curse bounce off him. Almost gives the impression to others that he's invincible. kool
kagemusha 2/2/03 . chapter 6
very cute mood swings. Interesting wand-less magic. Cool chappie...wonder how they did find out Sevvie's fav. sweets
kagemusha 2/2/03 . chapter 5
awww sev is all cuddly! Very very kawaii!
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