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Kokoro Sabishii
2008-02-13
ch 26,
abuseYAY! You're amazing...has anyone ever told you that? Probably, but I'm telling you anyway; YOU'RE AMAZING!
Kokoro Sabishii
2008-02-13
ch 24,
abuseThe autor's note on this one made me snark greatly. ^_^
ravenhairedjane
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseI was so & so...
Gurl you are 1 in a Million...
your idea was shocking in a sense & totally nonchalant...
Albeit it being short, I was overwhelmed with joy of the uttermost gladness of getting to know YAOI!
YAOI OTAKUS BURN THE HOUSE!
s0hmam0miji
2007-10-10
ch 26,
abuse*wibble* So sweet. I can see Gojyo being touched by Hakkai giving him the "normal" life he never had at home... and by doing all the little thoughtful things that loved ones often do for each other, but that Gojyo never really experienced.
serenitatis417
2007-10-05
ch 26,
abuseVery good fic! Good job.

Mmhmm, they ARE definitely married.
Me of Many Faces
2007-09-16
ch 26,
abuseThis is frickin' Amazing!
Eyes of Shinigami
2007-09-12
ch 26,
abuse*wipes a tear* That was just too sweet!

I love the dynamic that you've displayed. Hakkai is a lot like Sanzo in that his actions speak louder than his words. I really liked the silent conversation that passed between them. You could almost picture it taking place on night at their little house. I loved it!

You always have Hakkai's voice spot on. It never ceases to amaze me, really. Simply beautiful.

What a way to round off this exquisite set of drabbles. *le sigh*

LOVE!
~Ken-chan
Lauand
2007-09-08
ch 26,
abuseMy favourite ones are:

Change, because I'm a sucker for that kind of situations and I like how you described it through Sanzo's eyes.

Intimacy, because I'm a sucker of this kid of situations, too, and the concept of Gojyo getting attached easily is endearing (as well as true).

Tears, because it's really beautiful. I think it's my very fav.

X-change for the karmic implications. So true.

Years, because you make Gojyo human and adorable.


In general, I liked them all. You have a nice style and good ideas. I like the way you conclude your drabbles, sometimes with contradictions, sometimes with unexpected turns, but always with closing concepts, I mean, you can tell the drabble has really finished. And well, that's all, I think.
Bloody's soul
2007-09-08
ch 26,
abusemarvelous ending! *clap clap*
I love particulary "years" ^^
Scrunchy
2007-09-07
ch 26,
abuseDude, I'm in there twice! XD

Aw... Gojyo's fidgeting with words...

It's over? ._. I'm sad now...
UpperClassK9
2007-09-07
ch 26,
abuseDid i actually see my name there? >Rubs eyes< Wow! I'm so HAPPY! Thank you! YAY! Well, on to the actual review now. ^-^

Gojyo seems like he wants to cry or go really emotional at the end of Zipper. I think that's what you were aiming for anyway, so nevermind. :)

I like Change, Extreme, Monocle, Nag (The intoxicated dance with the broom was just to hard to resist!), Player, Selfish, X-change and probably Years. It's alot, not exactly just a couple... -.-" It's your fault your stories were so fun to read!! Sigh, it's like the end of a good book or something now... WAH~! T-T
CessoRestito
2007-08-27
ch 24,
abuse>D< lol if the Sanzo-gummi ever remember their past lives Kanren/Gojyo will so be like

Kenren/Gojyo: "...I told you so."

Tenpou/Hakkai: -_-*
CessoRestito
2007-08-27
ch 10,
abuse>D< poor jeep, thank goodness Hakkai is there to save him >D
CessoRestito
2007-08-27
ch 3,
abuse>D< haha, Sanzo, why are you so cool?

sorry, normally I wait till the end to review-_-
Scrunchy
2007-08-25
ch 25,
abuse... if Gojyo got a gray hair... XD I don't even wanna think about it.
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