I'm finally reviewing this! - And I loved what I had read.

My favourite scene was when Ricks allowed himself to be possessed. Nice ideas! Oh, and I love you how describe Vivian too. Well done.

I thought that was so beautiful. I mean... really beautiful.

The story was just great. I loved it.

I liked it.

This has got to be one of the best fanfic I have ever read. Please keep going and write some more, it's just not right to stop it here.

What a great story! Vivian was perfect, and I love the OC shipping. This story was so good, it's going on my favs! _ Kudos to you for making such a great one-shot!

Contrary to what you think, you got Vivian's personality perfectly. Too bad this is a oneshot though, as I'd like to read more of this. But then again, you said you didn't have much to go on since you don't have Gamecube.