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| Social Bunny 2008-04-11 ch 8,  | abuseThis is an awesome story. Awesome. Butterfly-verse makes my head spin, but the characters are incredible. Everything loses the normal fragile fantasy feel, and we are left with your butterfly characters- real. I like the writing itself too. |
| alsdssg 2007-09-27 ch 8, | abuseVery nice. Poor Eragon. Hasn't gotten the hang of raising a baby dragon, I see. |
| alsdssg 2007-09-17 ch 7, | abuseI love Eragon's bonding with Baby Saphira. It's very cute. So, it's good that they'll at least know the difference between Angela and Katrina now. |
| alsdssg 2007-07-30 ch 6, | abuseWhy does Katrina think she's Elain's daughter? Hm. I guess I'll find out. Baby Saphira is so cute! |
| tayshawing 2007-07-16 ch 5, anon. | abusecool,keep it up |
| alsdssg 2007-07-15 ch 5, | abuseWhat is up with Angela? Update soon. I can't wait to find out. And baby Saphira's cute. |
| Spottedstar106 2007-07-15 ch 5, | abusePlease update soon!That was great! Spottedstar, leader of windclan |
| charlemagnebrat1 2007-07-09 ch 4, | abusethank you for your v. good story- please continue a mention of Selena would be cool, like in a flashback or something is she still dead in this reality bcos she isn't mentioned? would she die if she had kept eragon? |
| alsdssg 2007-07-08 ch 4, | abuseYea! The egg hatched. I loved Thorn's conversation with Tornac. So, Angela's possessing Katrina? That's weird but cool. |
| alsdssg 2007-07-01 ch 3, | abuseWell, that was amusing. The broken desk thing was hilarious. Tornac is very amusing. |
| alsdssg 2007-06-24 ch 2, | abuseHmm. That was an interesting prelude. I liked it. It was...surreal's the word, I guess. |
| Spottedstar106 2007-06-24 ch 2, | abuseThat was deep!Amazing!Um . . .whats another word for incredable?Please continue!Please update soon! Spottedstar, leader of windclan |
| tayshawing 2007-06-24 ch 2, anon. | abusesounds intersting, can't wait to see what happens next hope u update soon |
| Du Shur'tuglar Freohr 2007-06-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseIs Angela evil here?! O_O Yow. Eragon's nutso. *thinks about how he angsted about killing bunnies in Ellesmera yet slaughtered hordes of humans at the Burning Plains* Nevermind, canon. XD Roran and Nasuada are leading the Varden along with Jeod. Ok, COOL. O_O :D This will be a supremely cool fic, I'm sure of it... Can't wait for more! -Death of the Riders P.S. *checks profile* Myself, I ship Brom/Morzan (yes, I KNOW I'm nuts), but nothing's wrong with Galbatorix/Morzan... :D |
| obssessed wiv everything 2007-05-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Nice descriptions. And a cliffhanger, very effective for making readers read the next chapter. Can't wait to see what happens |