One word, UPDATE. Though I'm actually surprisingly patient when it comes to updates. My own stories are kinda on hiatus due to writer's block so I can complain to other authors for their lack of updates. So meh. *shrugs*

nice and interesting!! pls update!

Hey, this is an awesome fic! i was hooked after the first chapter!!

please tell me you're gonna carry on with it!

please!

I'm crazy! Why did it take me so long to get to this FANTASTIC fic? I love just everything. The characterization of the protagonists, the political/historical plot and how you have chosen to set it in a post-revolutionary Fuuka country. This is something for sure very innovative in this fandom. I got a look at your profile, why did you write that you feel awkward in writing conversations? The ones here are just perfect! :-D

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lol. its been a while. mm...read your lj. so side stories to create the characters? or just strengthen characterization? lol. anyways...even powerless shizuru can still tease natsuki. XD nice. i give kudos for that.

renny-chan

Natsuki is crushing on Shizuru ;)I think she should just capture Shizuru as her own pleasure slave. lol

PPMS!!

As I was reading this I kept about the French Revolution, and then A Tale of Two Cities after the opening line in chapter four (since it was the same as that novel's). I'm not sure what the overall plot is, but I'm interested to see what happens. I'd also like to see more of the political climate with regards to other nations; since you did mention that the royal family of Fuuka was eliminated, what were the reactions of other countries? I'll hope to read more of this in the future.

i like the fic, but i cant help but feel like it's going really slow, hopefullu by the next chapter, i wont fell that way.

...-blinks- You quoted that. Fun. You can make Searrs whatever you want, since it's your story. Heck, I made Gakuten'Ou a ship.

My brain's too plotbunny-filled to leave much of a review, so let's see... I'm worried about Nao, feeling neutral about Shizuru, thinking things will be lighter (not that they're dark at the moment) now that Mai's here, and glad Natsuki accepted the dinner offer, since it's too soon for anything else.

Ugh. I have nine hours and thirty minutes left.
~Naolin

Man, I still can't get over the fight that you had both Nina and Arika killed! And even though he's dead, I still believe it was all Nagi's fault!

really great story!

why do i always seem to fall in love with stories where chances are, they wont end well?! it must be my masochistic personality..;o)

oh well, there`s always hope that everything will turn out fine for shizuru and natsuki. there is, right? *puppyeyes*

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fantastic as always, marashapeshifter-san. :)

hey, i actually liked a particular sentence: 'Shizuru's mood seemed to become more cheerful, just as a clown's would upon donning its mask'. out of all the things that you have written in this fic regarding shizuru so far, that particular sentence seemed to describe HiME shizuru perfectly. :)

hehehe...natsuki, are you starting to soften up with the prisoner? actually considering on declining mai's offer because shizuru would be eating alone...hehehe...and what's the deal with reito? :) ah, please post the next chapter asap! :) just kidding. :)

peace!

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yay, plot twist coming up! i think the meeting with the president is going to be very interesting. nao going to searrs for a top secret mission sounds interesting too. XD can't wait for the next chapter.

thanks for the update. :D

*grin*
Very very cool.