I don't know if I'd like that as the ending, but I enjoyed your writing style, if not the content.

Oh my god. moving story. sad ending. *exhales* this was not how i wanted to spend my summer, fretting over Sara, but all of us are. we aren't alone in this. Great writing, hon.

I agree with you! I'm so glad to see this. I'm so worried about all the Grissom/Sara people will be all pityfull and fill this fandom with their wank. Yuck!

I really hope this is how it ends up. Great story!

...that wasn't very nice...didn't help my optimism much...

Dang, that was depressing. But highly likely, if Jorja Fox doesn't renew her contract. :D Wonderfuly done (even though I misspelled that...)

Chillingly powerful, poetic and succinct. A very beautiful take on the season finale. Fantastic, I applaud you. Truly tragic. Love the memory of the game between Grissom and Sara. Wow, very powerful indeed.

That is so good, and so sad, i haven't actual watched living doll becuase i live in england and it isn't on for another 9 weeks

Creepy story, very much like how the episode ran with all the scene/POV jumping. Sounds like you've read Rosencrantz and Gildenstern Are Dead (the questions game), am I right?

Anyways, I like your ending, very dramatic, though I really hope that Sara lives!

Well..nice story but as a fan of GSR..i dont want her to die but i do bellieve there's a reason why they called the episode living doll. Sara has to be alive.With your great writing skills ..could you write one where she survives..for me..please..:-)

I like the idea of the pressure of the car being the only thing keeping Sara alive so that in the end it's actually Grissom who is responsible for her death. It would be a good ending. Very emotional and heartbreaking but i'm glad that's not the way it ended. C.S.I. without Sara and with a heartbroken and destroyed Grissom wouldn't seem right. It would change all the characters too much. It's good as is. Nice fic though.