|Reviews for Temperature|
| Guest 2/10/10 . chapter 18
...You know, when in gay fanfiction the ENTIRE GENDER that is 'women' is bashed..
I always feel a little pissed off.
I mean most of the characters in canon don't even have an inch of that opinion in them you know?
Not so sure about Kaoru and Hikaru so i'm not gunna like.. say anything.
I MEAN I'VE NEVER MET EVEN ONE SINGULAR GAY GUY WHO HATES WOMEN.
Or even heard of a gay guy who hates women.. unless he has social issues. Jez.
Am I the only one?
For some reason i feel like i've just written a fandom secret O.O Sorta.
| Phiso 5/26/08 . chapter 51
Absolutely lovely, and I adore how it's all in teeny little drabbles like this. Makes everything much faster and much less flowery - too long and you risk overwriting. Something I, heh, know well.
I hadn't thought about some of these ideas before. Temperature, for instance, the first drabble - I never really considered what it'd be like to know that someone else even has the same skin temperature as you. Odd.
And really, this could technically apply to any pair of close people, or at least the non-romantic chapters could - an analysis of close human relationships, and what they can do to a pair's behavior. It's interesting.
But yea. Enough fancy talk. This was very cute and deliciously angsty and I liked it a lot. Good work!
| kumik 5/16/08 . chapter 46
gives me a look that would put Hunny to shame"
Gahgahgah it's so cute! /
Oh I love your writing so much, it's simple (not overflowing with ivory orbs) and yet touching and sweet!
And the twins they're so cute X3
| Kuma-cchi 3/13/08 . chapter 51
Wow this was so amazing. Angsty, but very deep. I like that depth in your writing. A very mature perspective to their relationship which is - after all - very complex. Thank you, I enjoyed reading it. And you deserve to feel loved!
Gonna go on to the sequel now. Adios.
| DXM Junkie 3/9/08 . chapter 51
This story was adorable, I enjoyed reading it so much. I feel like it played out the correct way too, that Kaoru would be the one who would eventually fall in love, but Hikaru, who was still confliced with the outside world mentality would reject him and it would tear Kaoru apart. I adored chapter fourteen, thirty seven, and fifty the most.
| anon 3/3/08 . chapter 51
Omg I luv these drabbles so much! I love how u didn't write too much in one chapter but still got the story across. _
| gingergingertea 2/17/08 . chapter 50
Although chapter 45 had 101 words. ;)
I thought this was incredible. Thank you.
| Kiira-san 1/12/08 . chapter 50
It's sweet as it is
Or you could write more...
Yay... I love this. you finished nicely, and I'm not sad any more!
Now I'm gonna go read more and see how depressed I get again...
Not that much, I think, if I compare them with yours!
| Kiira-san 1/12/08 . chapter 40
I'm so depressed now.
I've been reading Hitachiin angst all night!
And now I'm even -more- depressed.
Your short paragraphs are so to-the-point.
They are so awesomely effective.
| Pelin 12/19/07 . chapter 51
So good. Cheers.
| Safari Layne 11/6/07 . chapter 12
lol Hikaru had another person over XD
| Kirah Ruth 10/18/07 . chapter 1
Kirah: You're wrong, of course.
Ruth: Kirah is consistently colder than me.
Kirah: And YOU perpetually feel like you have a fever.
Ruth: But aside from that...
Kirah: It is a nice thought.
| Angelina Opac 9/8/07 . chapter 50
number fifty is my favorite one of all. I love the last two sentances.
| Tiya-hxr 9/3/07 . chapter 49
Hey, about translation, i don't know if someone already asked you, but can i translate it in French ? *o*
| Tiya-hxr 9/3/07 . chapter 38
Oh my god, Kaoru just broke my heart, crying like that ! I'm so happy i can read what's next, i would not have been able to wait ;o;