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| Mage the Observer 2008-03-10 ch 3, | abuseAbsolutely adorable. The innocence that Gina shows is priceless, and the twist ending was well worth reading! |
| The Laughing Libra 2008-03-10 ch 2, | abuseGrr... I see my crappy internet connection only managed to publish the first line of my review for Chapter 3! I went on to say that "While I loved reading all the chapters of this fic, I think that ch 3 was ESPECIALLY good! I certainly laughed out loud the most at that chapter, and I loved (and certainly didn't expect) the twist ending. It was just fantastic! Thank you, Rhianwen!" ^_^ |
| Trying To Breakaway 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseWait lememe see if I get this: Jill now likes *cough stalks cough* Kurt and Joe, Louis is married or is in love with Ann, Gina and Dia are gay, and Alex has nobody. Wait Gina and Dia are gay? Thats not right. Jill should rot in hell, and Gina gets the cute, yet slightly niiave doctor! Or should she? Wait, so yeah. I enjoyed the story! Even if Jill didn't rot in hell. But the ending was so unexpected. And I thought you liked Gina/Alex parings. Or you still do, but wanted to try this one out. Or I'm just insaine and should do my homework like my parents think I'm doing right now! Great job! |
| kelley28 2008-03-07 ch 3, | abuseI love how you waited until the end to add the part about DiaxGina. I certainly wasn't expecting it. You are as funny as ever! |
| The Laughing Libra 2008-03-07 ch 3, | abuse*sighs happily* An update from Rhianwen! Yay! Can anything be more wonderful? |
| The Scarlet Sky 2008-03-07 ch 3, | abuseOh, what can I say but... God, do I love your writing. And this story, both hilarious and witty, has finally come to a satisfactory end. I remember when you first posted it, and now, I think I love it even more. Great work, and congrats on finishing this fic! |
| Sapphire Lupe 2007-08-01 ch 2, | abuseOh, I loved it ^^ Awesome piece of work! I absolutely love your writing style! Hope to see another update soon. Keep up the good work ^^ (Oh! I'm in your fic ^^ Except my name is spelled with an "e", Gena.) Best Wishes, Sapphire Lupe |
| The Scarlet Sky 2007-06-21 ch 2, | abuseYAYNESS! I love this story so much! This is so great; but I wouldn't be surprised if this ended up slash. I'm not too big on it, but whatever. Nothing against it, just have trouble reading it. But this is great, and I wouldn't mind reading more! ^^ |
| Chicken Yuki 2007-05-22 ch 2, | abuse::looks at new review system:: Yep, I'm human. I was worried for a sec I was a different species... Ah, anyway; strange. This take on Jill remains me of my paranoid spaz version of Katie from my fics... except she's actually WITH the Doctor! ...Ugh, Katie X Alex?! ::shivers:: Okay, as much as I don't want to think of the possibilities, I'm seeing them play out here with Jill as the unsuspecting body-snatcher victim. ::shivers:: (Did I ever mention how much I despise that violent loli chick?!) Yeah. Dia is kickass as usual, Jill is being "Katie" (that's my new vocab word) Gina is... pitiable, but adorable... ::cries:: and Ann is just too cool for words. Why do I find MM's Ann far more... "pleasant?" She was actually one of my first friends. Dunno what's up with the last part of Chapter 2, but good luck. The only thing that may scar me for life here is if Jill suddenly gets into Goth-Loli... ::shivers:: |
| roxas-kh 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuselol. poor gina... I feel sorry for her. |
| The Scarlet Sky 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, poor Gina...Jill needs to back off. Alex should dump her; she's too clingy. Gina x Alex all the way! Lol, but you're not going for that, are you? Whatever, it's still good. |
| Saddletank 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseDamn, how I hate women like Jill. They need to 1) Get a Life (tm) and 2) Die. And not necessarily in that order. Please kill her with extreme predjudice in part three, its what the crazy looney deserves. However the stress of reading about such a screwed up nitwit was deliciously relived by paragraph six and hearing about Miss Deering's love of horseriding. You had me howling in laughter for a full five minutes there. Nice. A good belly laugh Friday evening, it sets me up for the weekend. |
| Wolfemann 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseYay for three parts! ^^ Poor Gina though. Jill needs to have a tragic combine accident. >:) |