Aw

What a cute way to end, they're so cute together. Like how Greg just shows up, makes it kind of funny. Sara's all panicky and Nick's all 'no big deal'

Greg: I still hurt

Sara: you could be dead

Greg; Least I wouldn't hurt

Sara: men

:P

Em loves the story, and Charlie's a great villian

can't wait to see what you will be updating next!

lovely! you put so much chemistry between greg and sara in this story. good work with that. all the little moments, the looks between them, their conversations... well done. nice story!

Aw... how cute!
Gr8 way 2 end a story!
Awesome story
Amy

'“I think I like complicated,” he added.'

Ah, what a sweet ending. Thanks for finishing this... and I wouldn't mind a continuation either, especially since (if I remember correctly) Charlie is still out there, and if he thinks Greg is dead, wouldn't he be coming after Sara (and might even do so after he finds out Greg is still alive, just to hurt him?)

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!
ok now I'm really hyper!
that was so gd but whatz going 2 happen 2 Greg?
Pleez ud ASAP :)
Amy

Oh no! and you didn't really leave much hope for Greg, did you! I'm hoping that the reference to the window the flames hadn't reached is a hint that Greg could still be rescued...or that he actually isn't in there...please update again and let your readers know, one way or another.

Is this really only one section? lol. Then again I got all of this in one mass section, so it can be hard to tell, lol.

"I think I know where Greg is,” she said, jumping up, and the three men looked at her in surprise. “At the cabin, I think Charlie has taken him to the cabin. The guy isn't very bright. He'll just pull the same thing again.”


Lol, he's just insane :P Which can be just as bad.

Hehe, can't wait till the next part. Then of course I'll be pushing for a posible sequel

*evil laughter*

is greg killed? i certainly hope not! the suspense is killing ME, lol. anyways, another piece of great writing here. continue!

Greg! No!

...But the fact that there's a broken window seems like a good sign, despite the fact that he was tied up and seemingly unable to move. I'm holding high hopes he made his escape.

You know how to weave some mighty fine suspense in all of your stories. I'm so excited for the next chapter. I hope you find time soon! Another superb chapter!

wow. what an intense ending to that last chapter! i think you're doing a good job with this story. the characters seem like themselves, and the plot is very nicely done. and now... suspense! keep up the good work.

'“What do you mean, not end well?” Greg dared to ask'

Oh no, poor Greggo. He was willing to save Sara, but look where it has gotten him. hopefully the lab will be on top of things (or a helpful neighbour will call 911) before Greg is permanently injured

Please update again when you have a chance (and although I may regret adding this, please don't do it at the expense of your thesis)

oh...more suspenseful. I like that you went back and recounted what happened to Greg. althouch Charlie is looking less and less stable, isn't he?

And I can totally sympathize about doing something else instead of what you should be...only in my case it is my dissertation and not a thesis. But my theory is that sometimes you need a break (and of course I want to encourage you to write more:)

so has the 'review or Greg dies' threat worked for you :-D

Since I'm catching up on my e-mails, I don't have to worry about waiting for the next chapter (yet). But I thought I would just say (once again) I'm glad you've had an opportunity to update so much

Lol, I love Charlie's reasoning.

"Yeah, I built the bomb, I put it there, I waited till everyone was around it, then i blew it up'

Sara: So you killed them

Charlie: What? It wasn't me, it was the bomb! Get your facts straight :P

Why is no one reviewing this? It's great!

*excited because I know what happens next*

Mwahaha! More evil torture to the poor little Greg. Ever think that we are too hard on him?

Greg would think so, I'll assume. Sara probably feels unloved, all this attention is being paid to Greg and poor little Sara is forgotten. Kind of her fault though, because she could have saved Greg, could have gotten him out of there, but of course not.

She liked her way better, wanted to hide those case files before she got in trouble. Because that's more important than Greg's life.

Greg: Is that true?

Sara: Of course not, I was just doing what the script said I had to do.

Greg: Oh...okay, I guess I can forgive you for that. But Sara...?

Sara: Yeah?

Greg: Why is it always me?

Sara: Because they love you

Greg: I figured they would be nicer to me if they loved me.

Sara: The definition of love varies.

Greg: Yeah...I forgot...

Hmm...still 9117 characters left. Seriously, who writes that much in a review? I know Jen and I could from time to time, but *that* long? I don't know.

Back to the story though, (Like I ever got to it in the first place, lol) Love the Greg part, and Charlie is coming. That's good, Em likes Charlie, he's such a funky character. Nothing bothers him, going from one thing to the next, no big deal. Just got out of jail, kidnapped a CSI, oh, let's swing by the police department and see if anyone wants to join!

Lol, love the villians. Was watching CSI last night with the return of the mini-killer. Never really liked her, I think CSI cheated us out on a potentially good villian. Meh, just my thoughts though.

Still over 80 characters left to go. Seriously, why don't we have more room for summaries? Em always has to shorten her summary, really not fair.

Can't wait for the next update, the story keeps getting better and better!