Hm... I really liked this chapter... well, the whole story so far. ^_^ I'm aware that you haven't updated in about 6 years... but it'd be nice if you did. :)

I read this really fast! It was awsome, I'll wait anxiously for you to update, so good luck!

I totally understand you! She is MORE than a pain in the **! I HATE HER; I HATE HER; I HATE HER! But, I think you are right... ha, I will review you again when I finish all the chapters. For now, I can assure you this is an awsome story!

Aw, poor Seifer, he's so screwed.

I think Squall was pretty much in character in this part. It is hard to write Squall in these type of situations...I know.

But GREAT job so far.

Your story is quite interesting. Hope you'll update soon.

Have I mentioned that I love your character development in this? They are so...IN character. Which is what some(if not most) SxS fics lack. This is great. I loved it and I hope you'll update soon!

**Tootles**
~Eternal_Darkness*~

oh great story hun, i can't wait for you to update! great twist on it and i LOVE it! you need to update ASAP!

o me like! ^^ please continue!

Hey I love your chapter. Please continue!
Squall was flirting? o.O I must be blind.

This story is still great. Please continue. Especially with your Bloodcrosskey, too!

I have a knack of not reviewing...it's so bad! I've read this one too! But looks like you haven't updated this from the last time I read it either! Please update this one too, this is so interesting! I can't wait to see Squall explain to Seifer about his father.
- Wai

I like this fiction. You're keeping Squall in character, yet letting him be flirty. And I had thought it almost impossible. :)

When exactly is there more to come? Iwannareadmoreiwannareadmore!!! ^_^ This fic rulez!

Niiiiice story. Love it, Continue.

wow, this is great! what a great twist on the seifer-mind-control thing! i love it! hey, will rinoa be ceremonially fed to lions later on? write more! now! seifer needs to know what happened!