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crazikido2
2009-12-04 . chapter 4
i felt like i had to give you thunbs up and many thanx for creating this entertaining story!
YouKnowYouLovett
2009-10-13 . chapter 13
I absolutely LOVE this story with all my heart! It's so wonderfully written and believable, and it kept me entertained. There were no dull sections- there was constantly something intriguing happening, and I loved the build up to Eden and Willy's relationship actually taking off (that 'I don't feel missed' section? LOVED IT)!

I realized that you've not posted any new chapters for a long time, but I just wanted to let you know that this story is fabulous, and I'd love to know what happens to Willy and Eden! :) (And Allie, of course, haha)!
Narias
2009-07-28 . chapter 13
I love this story! Do you plan on finishing this story? I really hope so!
Haeronwen
2009-05-20 . chapter 13
Hello there,

I know you will probably not continue writing this marvelous story, but I put it on my alert list anyway.
I really hope you will someday find the time to write more. Since I loved it so far. And I want to read more about Eden and Willy.

-Barbara
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 13
MORE MORE MORE! Omg you have to continue. This story line is so amazing and adorable. =] Your writing is so creative and unique. I can't wait for future chapters, I am a HUGE face of this FanFic. =D
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 12
That was such an amazing chapter! Omg, this story just keeps getting better and better. Ugh. Must...read...more!
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 11
Aw! This was by far one of my most favorite chapters. They are SO cute together! =] I love Eden's conscience(s)! There so funny and make it all so much more enjoyable!
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 10
God Dammit! [Bad] Kiss already! KISS! Ugh. I'm just going to have to keep reading, aren't I? Alright...alright I'll keep reading... YAY! ^_^
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 9
That was such a cute chapter! Allie is such a funny character, but if I was in Eden's position she would be dead and locked in a closet somewhere with chocolate to keep her busy. lol. =]
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 7
Omg...CHAPTER 8, HERE I COME! =]
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 6
Aw. That was so cute. The part when Willy runs into the elevator always gets me. XD
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 5
Dammit, they almost kissed! It's alright, the waiting makes it more thrilling for when the moment actually comes! O! I can't wait!
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 4
O! I love the part at the end: "I like it." So so cute! I love Eden's character so much, she is just so perfect for the story line. =]
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 2
That was a really cute chapter. Their bonding in a secret-kind of way. ^_^
deletedaccountdeleted
2008-06-16 . chapter 1
I'm so hooked on your story now, I'm going to have read it all the way through! After reading the first paragraph I decided your story will be added to my favorite story list. =]
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