Great flow in action & dialouge, very nice. I DID NOT see the end bit coming though. Wow, Slinx or Jade... Whatever you wanna call it. Good job :)

This reminds me a bit of when Terra was working with Deathstroke in the comics.

*Ew...good flow in the dialogue and action, but just...*gags*

Slinx eh. That's a new pairing. Didn't see it coming. Strange story. Strange is good

RG

Slade and Jinx... yikes! Didn't see that coming!

Keep the good writing.