 kagome3456 2008-03-05 . chapter 1 this has been the best story i have ever read please please please please please please comtinue you right wonderfully |
 Murphy Law(I'm a real author) 2007-07-10 . chapter 1 It *sob* Is *sob* SAD *sniffle* please continue and make Danny nice. |
 SkyAngel429 2007-05-19 . chapter 1Great beginning, please continue! If you need ideas, some things you might want to touch on are: is Danny the Dan from the thermous (and if so how did he get out) or regular timeline Danny (and if so, how did he turn evil)? How long has evil Danny ruled over Ammity Park? |
 Muse-at-dawn 2007-05-18 . chapter 1you'll destroy my already broken nerves if you don't continue this, please? *puppy stare* please? it's good and I'm pretty intrigued |
 Rob Phantom 2007-05-18 . chapter 1wow,this is one heck of a dark oneshot, it sounds like the begining of a good story. i hope that it continues. |
 Amber-Phantom 2007-05-18 . chapter 1yes yes! CONTINUE PLZP LZPLZP LZPLZPZLPZLZPLZPZLPZLPZLZPLZPLZ |