Hey, man, it's Key19! I have to admit, I'm not a fan of the whole Deleted Scene things made by Dr. Dude IMHO. I think they're rather pointless, and unoriginal, but you're deleted scene is actually better than others I've seen, so I tip my hat off to you. I do have a complaint and some advice: I know you like using "&" when saying "And" and it's a lot quicker, but that's something you don't really use in writing. You should really consider using "and" a lot more when writing stories. It helps the reader focus more on the story. And my complaint is, and this is something Neros fails to do whenever I tell him, please ask me to use content from my story. I noticed the Horn Head line and reference to ATBT. I don't like it when people borrow content from my stories without asking me, so please be aware of that. Other than that, good job.

Key19

What an awesome scene, Rock Raider! I'll accept that! Nice work!