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dreamgirl96
2009-08-19 . chapter 7
I think my level of pervertedness was just beat by the Queen of Yaoi...
*bows downs and worsships Anna Tramell*
I LOVED IT ALL!
I usually don't like angst, but this was an exception cuz of all the orgy, sex, rikuoxkaza, sex, slight randomness (and did i mention sex?)
I REALLY can't wait 2 find out more about the future of these two!
Keep up the good work! ^_^
aisuru Aki
2009-07-18 . chapter 2
so angsty! but so good! is it a happy ending?
anon azure
2009-07-15 . chapter 7
I like this story it's kinda stings...
I wanna know what happens next...

And as if I wasn't losing enough blood..
The foursome scene just made me lose
even more blood then I should...

I shall be waiting for the next chapter!
Jordanne
2009-07-04 . chapter 7
le gaspe! how intriguing. and poor kazahiya. you should be nicer to clamp's babies lol. but this was a really good (if short) chapter
Sexykill69
2009-07-04 . chapter 7
You should be ashamed!
Just kidding, It has been a very long time! This chapter envoked a cold passion with in me...I only wished I had watched the anime. (I probably will now, these characters are so interesting)
Good luck Anna! I'll come back and finish the story when I have successfully finished the anime~!
Nikkapillar
2009-07-04 . chapter 7
...Can I just get one swing at Rikuo? Just one, please?
Poor Kazahaya, he must be so sad. He's been trying to get Rikuo to accept him all this time, and it's so hard, so...why should he love someone else? We all know how it feels, right? If SHE'S good enough, how come I'm not? Poor Kazahaya! If I were Rikuo, I'd jump on that (totally in more than just a perverted way). Kazahaya is the cutest thing ever. And I bet he looks demn sexy in a skirt. Sexier than Tsukiko no doubt. >:

Rikuo, shut up and admit you love Kaza for the sake of EVERYONE'S sanity.
Nikkapillar
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
O/O Y-yay...
I have...nothing more to say but...ohh. Thanks.
Nikkapillar
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
TAT Rikuo doesn't love Kaza...? But HOW? He's so freakin adorable, and so sweet... Throughout it all I was so cought up in the SUPER HOTNESS of your lemon writing skills, and totally forgot that at the beginning it stated that all Rikuo wanted was a fuck... ); Poor Kazahaya... Rikuo! I'ma beat you over the head with a metal bat!!
Lynn252
2009-07-03 . chapter 7
Ooh. Ouch. That's definitely gotta be a sore spot for Rikuou.
This fanfic makes me want to hit Rikuou. Hard. And then give Kazahaya a big hug. :'(
Lynn252
2009-06-08 . chapter 6
...
More please?? ;P
I feel so bad for Kazahaya! T_T
I hope this will end in a happy way.
Pic's-Pixie
2009-03-31 . chapter 6
ugh how could u leave this story at that point! :( and havn't updated since 2007 :'( so mean lol
i hope u take up this story again at least just to finish it, thats a cruel place to leave it at
Hirakareta
2008-02-18 . chapter 6
I'm too lazy to sign-in but I'll review anyway *shrugs* It's pretty good. Could be better. The sex is a bit muddled. It's like 'Oh my hand is over here!...But wait my mouth is there too >,
Live.Love.Lie
2008-01-13 . chapter 6
Wow! This is so good! Kinda depressing in the beginning, but I have a feeling it might have a happy ending... if you update soon!! Please! I'm dying for the next chapter!
Loving the smex and angst. Keep going! =]
kidswithguns91
2007-12-19 . chapter 6
you're so enthusiastic! it makes me laugh!
wonderful wonderful :D
KC-Catharsis
2007-11-12 . chapter 6
-drools-
-dies from dehydration-
last words: "...I love you so much...sexy...orgy...bleah..."
XD
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