lol.loved it.please post soon.

lol.loved it.please post soon.

XD Crazy! Angry Siax! I lurve it!

Lol, your story's funny ;D

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!

LOL! Haha, this story is really funny! xD You gotta update more please! xD ...Hehe, smexy emo Zexion and his uber awsome hair and SMIRK! xD ...Lol, and I like the conversation Saix and Xemnas had about watching Arie and Tasha xD

Woot! I can imagine the hell that will break loose! And I'm enjoying every freaking minute of it! Geeze Vexen It's called a lock!

ROTFL this is so hilarious! you have to make more chapters! please?

great job!

Mkay.
So I liked how the girls were in this chapter more than they were in the other chapters. And I'll admit that you threw me a loop when you said that you thought they were Mary Sues too. I'm glad that it's not unintentional, so I'm going to take you out of the C2. If it was unintentional... that might be a bit bad. :/ But you're all good. Soo yeah.

See you around. Hope you have fun writing this =]

I wanna know! TELL ME DAMNIT!
i had lots of sugar today. XD

Yay your back!
Now I have something to read!
You know I can arrange for you to have an Army of Monkeys.

Hi there, I'm jiv3y.
You probably noticed that you'd been added to a C2 a couple weeks ago, and while it's probably not the best one you could have been added to...

Eh. Anyway.

I added you hesitantly. You're bordering on a humorous story with a lot of creativity, I'll give you that. The dialogue could be cleaned up a bit, but it's okay right now.

Write another chapter when you can and tell me when you do, because I'll check it out and see if you've improved. You're on your way to getting out the C2, though. I'm rooting for you! ^_^

Yours truly,
jiv3y

w00t! First review XD This is a really good story, I mean, if Org.XI appeared in my living room, i'd have to hide them all over the house so my parents wouldn't find out :)

Can't wait for chapter 3!

X~Nevis~X