|Reviews for Triple Identity|
| Ranglar 2/19/13 . chapter 57
Before I go on this rant, I want to let you know that I love this story and know that its much better than anything I could write. That said, I found a lot of problems with this chapter. Videl and Erasa were told about Raditz in chapter 40. They shouldn't be shocked by Bulma telling them about that. Also, Videl, Erasa, and Sharpener all probably met Piccolo at the costume party. Videl remembered being introduced to him in chapter 47. Bulma should know this; she threw the party. Also, I'm not buying that explanation for the graviton. Gohan wouldn't risk his friends' lives like that by going in there so weak compared to normal. Still, this is a great story and I'm enjoying it immensely.
| Ranglar 2/19/13 . chapter 56
Why the hell did Gohan go into battle in the Graviton suit? It was just invented, so it's not like the commander could have been wearing it the whole time. What the hell was the point of him risking his life like that?
| maximusrexmundi 2/12/13 . chapter 11
:-O the commander... despite this being a Dbz fic, you make the most badass person normal. I bow before the epic
| ShotaroxPhillip 2/11/13 . chapter 61
| qtar1984 1/22/13 . chapter 61
I think Goku should say something about this, via King Kai. (As well announce his intention to compete in the WMAT.) I think Goku would be in favor of sharing the research, since he believes that someone should always be around to defend the earth, since the Sayians won't be around forever.
I also don't think that this research wouldn't be anything new since the ability to use energy seems to be common among advanced races in the db universe. I think that several races may have made this discovery and shared it (the training methods) with others at various times in the history of the universe.
Sayians and other races that had an inborn talent for energy usage never needed this information. Hence why this would be new to Vegeta, but I don't think he should be too surprised that scientific proof about energy exists.
| Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 61
Please come back and finish the story! It's sooooo good!
| Joe B 12/26/12 . chapter 61
| Chosen To Die 12/14/12 . chapter 1
Can't wait to finish this! :D
| Dbzhorsegirl 12/13/12 . chapter 1
If these guys can fly faster than light then ...
And if something that's moving at a speed just below the speed of light, can got around the earth 7 times per second
Gohan should be able to get to school in less than a second
| Joe B 12/11/12 . chapter 49
"I thought it was very nice! Like a very fine perfect wine just ready and akin to be opened by someone who is legally of the age that can drink!" My own direct quote!
| spook666 12/6/12 . chapter 61
Well this has been one of my favorite dragon ball z stories by far. The details are amazing and the way its written is fantastic i'm definetly impressed and very curious if your still writing this.
| Guest 11/4/12 . chapter 61
Hey, Lucifer-Allheart(sp?)! I just caught up with your DBZ Triple Identity story, and...Wow. Just, Wow. It took me awhile to work through it all, and not just because of the 60 chapters either (not that a long story is a bad thing). Every time I finished a chapter, and sometimes when I was only halfway through the chapter, I had to stop reading and just sit back and think about what had happened so far. This whole story is loaded with Drama Bombs, but when Gohan was revealed to be the Commander, that was literally the first and only time that I remember actually being speechless about something. I was all like, "Okay, so Videl and Co. are in a tight spot, the Commander is doing his thing, the bad guy gets the upper hand for the moment- *WHAM!* Gohan?! Where did you drop from?! I should have been expecting something like this since you're the main character, but seriously Gohan, when did you get here?!" 0_0 LOL I can laugh about it now, but the first time I read that chapter I was speechless, as I said. And then came all the chapters afterwards...In light of all this, I have only one thing to ask you...WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!
Also, I found two typing mistakes in Chapter 61:
A) "Almost as if on queue, the boy in front of Gohan turned around in his seat and addressed the half-Saiyan." You used the word 'queue', which refers to a line of people or things waiting to be examined/processed/served/whatever. What you meant to say was 'cue', which refers to a specific signal that one gives someone else to begin/end/do something.
B) "He wanted this to be over, but he was relocated to do it." Yeah, this one confused me for a minute. Why did he have to be relocated in order to get the meeting over with? But then I figured it out; you used the word 'relocated', which means moving something or someone to a different location for some reason, when you were meaning to use 'reluctant,' which means hesitation or fear or just plain dislike towards doing something. There may be other typos/misakes elsewhere in the story, but I don't really feel like reading through this whole story again just to find them...especially when its still on a cliffhanger! I ask you again, what happens next?! This story is awesome, keep up the good work! You should totally change some names and details and make this story an original published work!
| DtotheZ 10/22/12 . chapter 61
Wow this story is AWESOME! Can't wait for the next chapter
| Rashelle 10/21/12 . chapter 61
After reading this whole story over the past two days (it was that awesome), I have to say it's probably one of the most well written Fics I've ever read. The characterization is huge, and most characters that usually get made fun of have an active, serious role. Besides that, your OCs are all realistic and fit the story extremely well.
So with that, I'm asking you to NOT give up on this story. I can't tell how often you update, but it HAS been a good half a year now, and I'd hate to see such an amazing story as this to not be continued and finished.
LOVE THIS STORY!
| Pineno 10/9/12 . chapter 61
I started reading thins fic about 2 weeks ago and it is by far the best fan fic I have ever read. But now it seems as if you have abandoned it, or at least taken a break, at one of the biggest cliffhangers in the entire story. I give you much praise on the story but please don't stop writing it . It would be a shame for something so great to end here. Please update soon