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2008-05-31
ch 1,
abusethnx 4 writing it was so good! could u please write wat happened when they got out of the water and back to richards flat? that would b so great and id relle appreciate it! keep writing!-kcm
My Best Friend's a Vampire
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseYAY!

I like this story...but I squinted and the page went blurry...

Can you write slash for this series please? I like slash but can't write it good...

You will be really cool for forever...at least to me you will be...that's not a very good arguement is it?

This is really good...
deuteriuM Xtreme
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuseHello.

I just finished reading the first two books by yesterday, and I think this series actually has more uh, slash potential than Alex Rider. [I'm surprised nobody wrote about Pedro yet..]

I personally noticed also that Anthony Horowitz uses a LOT of short sentences to get the plot going. Usually with no more than 2 commas in a sentence, probably.

But that's just an observation. I like the idea of a continuation of canon, still. It's a nice little piece. (:
SupernaturalGal6
2007-07-25
ch 1,
abuseAwsome!
Bloody-Penn
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abuseAw ^.^ Nice fic. There needs to be more Gatekeepers Fiction
*Says something witty*
Cipher Admin Eevee
2007-06-01
ch 1,
abuseGood, short and straight to the point.
Your original idea of the flashback was certainly intriguing, and your writing style complements the plotline of the book.
A most impressive story.
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