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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where they finally found Sara. |
| S'Dot Yam 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abusethat is cool i like it. |
| bellabug 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseAs always, your language is nothing short of moving. I'm not one for angst when it is not coupled with a shamelessly fluffy ending, and am a permanent resident in the 'jorja resigned' bubble of hope, but this story was undeniable for its excellence. Rach. |
| endiahna 2007-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI thought that was wonderfully written but so so sad. Very deep and emotional. Great Job! |
| csiqueen 2007-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abusevery, very intricately written. a great job well done! please continue to write more! i just have one question, though. does sara die or do they save her in time? or did you write it that way to leave it up to our imagination? again, i really loved it! |
| Lilith 2007-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was heart-shattering and so good! Wonderfully written (no big deal with you, uh?) and so profound. It's such a beautiful depiction of Sara's feeling in such a nasty occasion. great, admirable job. |
| MileyKapri 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abusethat was so good! yeah. . .but 1 thing. . .you need to continue. . .because, like, does sara die? |
| Kegel 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Sad. *cries* |
| Moony's Lady 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseSo so so perfect. It was stylistically unsuaual, but so beautifully deep and touching. It gave me chills to read this, because I think you nailed the aparent confusion a person like Sara would have in a moment like this. Bravo, indeed, it's really admirable. |