 Dear Queenie 2007-07-28 . chapter 1Oh, you're making me cry now! Loved it, the sex ed. reminded me of school. D: |
 azami 2007-05-29 . chapter 1 id cry right now if i hadn't eat 30dag of chocolate while reading it |
 NctrnlBst 2007-05-22 . chapter 1Great story. I love the part where James refers to Lily as Flower. That sounds like such a sweet pet name that someone would give their girlfriend. Awesome job! |
 Ankh7 2007-05-20 . chapter 1 Yeah! Every teenager does drink given the opportunity...but everyone acts like it's such a sin, and unnatural...But okay, sorry, had to get that out...
I liked this story a lot. Especially the ending. The foreshadowing was great, and how it just tied in to the... future, I guess you could say. |
 Lily and James Love 4 ever 2007-05-20 . chapter 1Bunni, why did you? I liked this one so much, I can't believe its over just like that. *sniffle* That was one of the Best Remus/Sirius stories I've read, Great work, |
 Lars 2007-05-20 . chapter 1 I love this fic. BUT I got really sad when Sirius didn't get his Remus in the end, but that's just because I'm lame :D
Aww, the ending was so sad. :\
Lily was so fckin amazing, usually I hate her, but this time she was kinda...i dunno. xD
Anyways, love this fic |
 rekahneko 2007-05-19 . chapter 1I liked the style(s) and the unique flow of the story.
It kept me focused and interested through the whole thing.
Good job!
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 xxanglophilexx 2007-05-19 . chapter 1There was so much about this that I loved. Number one was Lily...she was perfection. I love strong, fiesty, all-business Lily. Just the thought of her giving Remus "The Talk" with fruity visual aids made me giggle, so of course the description of it had me clamping my hand over my mouth in hopes of not waking up the rest of the house. I also loved this line:
"If they start humping, I’ll stick an antler up Sirius’ **, James thought. Then shuddered. What if Sirius would like that?
Ew."
Very funny. The ending was sad, and I enjoyed the poetry thrown in. Bittersweet. |