|Reviews for Naruto: New Beginnings|
| vash3055 9/20/08 . chapter 27
it should be a naruhinasaku threesome in the end
or naruhina i perfer threesome because sakura has strong feels so does hinata
| DarkRavie 7/6/08 . chapter 27
Very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in your next one.
| DarkRavie 5/11/08 . chapter 26
Very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens in your next one.
| Tiger Paws 3/11/08 . chapter 4
I must say that I was enjoying this story until now. The use of the "Kage Bunshin" jutsu I could have let slide even though I dislike the concept of genins knowing the technique; however, teaching a genin the 4th's rasengan in under a minute is ridiculous and I'm afraid it has put me off this story.
| FanFiction.Net Says 2/9/08 . chapter 18
Extremely unrealistic if Naruto lost to Sasuke and Sasuke just beat everyone so easily.
| FanFiction.Net Says 2/8/08 . chapter 4
The Rasengan takes an IMMENSE amount of concentration and chakra control. The 4th took 3 years, Jiraiya took 3 month (I think...dunno), and Naruto took a week or two. How can you learn it in ONE MINUTE?
| that one chicken 2/8/08 . chapter 25
| DarkRavie 2/8/08 . chapter 25
Good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next!
| ZeroX1999 2/8/08 . chapter 4
This story is actually... kinda overpowered. How did Evo do the Kagebunshin? Kagebunshin is a kinjutsu a forbidden art. I really don't think anyone is going to teach him that unless Naruto or a random jounin does. And even then I would not expect him to make more than 1. Kakashi is an ANBU and he could only make 10 Kagebunshins. Evo making 2? That is like saying he has 1/5(one-fifth) of Kakashi's chakra potenial. That is just not going to happen. Ruy also has Kagebunshin with 5 clones? WTF? Now a genin has half of Kakashi's chakra potenial? Naruto is just special, with the Kyuubi and everything else you would expect Naruto to create that many.
The BIGGEST fact is that Kagebunshin is forbidden for a reason. Having a clone popped means that there is a tempory paralysis on the user. Having a clone to "die" means that you felt the blow mentally. There is ABSOLUTELY NO WAY can anyone but Naruto handle the stress of having 5 Kagebinshins be popped. It is the most ineffective jutsu ever unless you can endure the mental strains of the popping. So that being concluded, I hope that you can power then down. It is just simply unrealistic for them to be that powerful without the Kyuubi healing powers.
| Kusanagi13 1/20/08 . chapter 4
Dude seriously, did you even bother to actually read or watch Naruto before you wrote this?
First off, The fact that you have two Genin doing Kage bunshin is impossible, the reason being that to do Kage bunshin they would need massive chakra reserves, secondly, no matter how effective a teacher he is, Naruto couldn't possibly teach them rasengan in a few minutes, even if it is a weak ass version, plus it's one of the few momentoes from his father he has.
| Marcus 1/13/08 . chapter 4
I love the story so far..I even like jumped up a little and became overly joyed when Ryu did the Rasengan. I love that jutsu!
| Even better then the realthing 1/13/08 . chapter 1
pretty good i'd say but i think ur writing could be a little better though im not quite sure how srry 4 not being to helpful
| DarkRavie 1/13/08 . chapter 24
YAY Haku and Evo are alive! I can't wait to read what happens in your next chapter.
| redshadow0220 12/25/07 . chapter 23
good to see you are still writing this. this is a great christmas present indeed!
| DarkRavie 12/25/07 . chapter 23
Great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next!