(tears) the end me sad! but it was very heartwarming! you're sentences are getting better and the longer chapters are SO much better! update soon please!

♥Kay

(sigh) I have realized something within the past couple of days .. . . .. I HATE ELLE! she went after Peter, she went after Sylar. . . .WHATS HER DEAL?!?!?!?!? please update soon (and send me the next chapter) this is much better than the last chapter. . .. .

i love the chapter, sorry it took so long to review, your chapter was at the bottom of my email! (blushes) anyway, still a little choppy, but you're getting better! onto the next chapter!

So hard to find good Sylar/OC stories!
Update soon!
Later

(big smile) I have to say, i am very proud of you, my dear friend. your writing has come a long way. NO MORE SHORT SENTENCES! and there were more commas! beautiful! anyway, i think out of all the chapters i have read by you, this is probably THE best. . . . .yup! ☺ anyway, im gonna read your email and get back to you on what i think!

♥ Kay

P.S. Happy Easter and have a good spring break!

I love this! XD lol. Michael James - WAY. XD *catching up*

xoxo
vampie

NO!

damn. i think you just MIGHT HAVE proved my theory wrong. damn. BUT I STILL HAVE TIME! anyway, my mom said, if we go that is, that she will be chaperoning us to Disney World! i don't know if this is good or bad. she said i wasn't going without her! anyway, see you in September!

sad... she died... WAIT! HE KILLED HER! SEE! HE HAS NO FEELINGS WHATSOEVER! HE KILLED THE ONE HE LOVES!

hang on a sec... is this the end?

very good. HE STILL KILLED HIS MOTHER!

okay, so i am reviewing you now, and i am hoping you get this. i will say this again. SYLAR HAS NO FEELING WHAT SO EVER! learn this! and reading on...

yay! another SylarOC!! i love your story so far!! hope you update soon xx

nope... not together anymore... Jessica is dead... dun dun dun... update soon please!

the park scene was so cute!

This isn't believeable, there is no build up. You need to establish more of a foundation. But I do love the idea of Sylar finding love... he's in need of a hug, you can tell. :)

okay... so... some caring... ONLY A LITTLE THOGUH! anyway, sad that her mom is dead! this is one of your best stories! update soon please the story is on alert!