good read x)

Oh it's perfect, it's PERFECT. *gasps in amazement*

I was all "Yes Tifa! It's true! He's a meaningless, useless __(fill in choice profanity)__!" And then when the last bit came, I just stared at my computer screen and my jaw hit the ground. Then I jumped around for a bit and went to get my sister to read this too.

It was, like I've mentioned, perfect (the sister agrees). An accurate, if unflattering representation of Cloud and Tifa's relationship. The fact that Tifa doesn't need Cloud, but Love's a funny thing, so she'll keep him around, if not because of necessity, because of her own want.

Oh Love IS a many-splendid thing.

Well done my dear. Again.

Love and Cookies,

MR

hehe very good read. =] i love the last paragraph the best

a beautiful insight to Cloud's thoughts ^^

Aw! I love the pace in this. The short clipped phrases and the comfiness between the characters; the familiar problems that you'll run into when you live with a guy: even if said guy has saved the world twice et cetera, it doesn't mean he's learnt to flip the toilet seat back down like a good roommate. :D Really nice, entertaining read.

Oh I love this story, even if it is a bit on the short side. You write so magnificently it just really warms the cockles of my heart. You explain Cloud wonderfully- this is going straight to my favorites!

Great piece. I particularly like how you address those lost 5 years of his life, I've wondered about that myself.

Awesome! That's how I like to picture Tifa - independent and self-assured. I also see her as a very warm-hearted character, but sometimes I feel that other authors (including myself!) can make her too mushy. Good job on this, as always!

Lovely!

I love it! Very cute and so well-written, for one of my all time favorite pairings...this just gave me all kinds of warm fuzzies

aw kawaii...and i usaully don't really care for tifa/cloud.

Very nice piece excellent work.

Short and sweet. And perfect characterization, too. I loved it.

i love this story. great job!

i like it! :)