*Falls over laughing* I absolutely ADORE this! So simple yet so funny. It's so much like "If You Give a Moose a Muffin" that I could almost guess how it was going to end. Heh... I really like this. So perfect! ^_^ Wonderful concept... -Tifa Tyndal

I is confoozled! THis is by far my best children story now!

omg so cute! ^_^

XD Creative !

Haha, that was quite funny :3. Poor Shigure, that meanie-head Hatori hit him :

Great story! I used to love those books and read them to my little cousins now.

Hey it's finally my turn to review for you. This was funny. I never read if you give a mouse a cookie, but I could still enjoy this... gives ma an idea for a Harry Potter version. So thanx for that.

As I said I would, I checked out Fruit's Basket... funny. It took me a minute to get the names down, and then to figure out that Momiji is a boy, but is voiced by a girl... right?? I managed to see one whole episode and pieces of others, but I only really know Tohru, Momiji, Kyo and Yuki. I think it was Episode 12...

And I also want to add that the orange haired kid, I think that was Kyo, he reminds me of Ron witht that temper :) So overall really cute and funny story. And if I can find more english versions of this show I could probably get into it.

PEANUT BUTTER! CHOCOLATE CHIPS! MARSHMALLOWS! all in the same boiling pot and the in an ice tray... that would be good.
good story thing

HAHAHA! THE CYCLE WILL NEVER END! HAHAHAHAH!

ah, that's great! i used to love that book! i thought it was so cute. oh, but that whole thing was hilarious and might actually happen.

So cute! Love it!

That was so cute! Great job!

Haha! I loved these books when I was little. XD

And I shall read White As Snow as soon as I fight down the mounds of work I must do. >.>

~Brenna*

LOL.

That was great!

It's been a while since I've read If You Give A Mouse A Cookie, but I remember it enough to see the resemblance between the real book and the fic.

Very fun read. It's going on my favorites list.

I LOVED IT! Brava! XD