 saruke101 2007-08-30 . chapter 12he he thats kinda funny well good chappies and update soon!! |
 lovefatedestiny 2007-08-25 . chapter 11omgg! omg! the dragon! please update soon! |
 Kisa44 2007-08-25 . chapter 11Good chapter! Update Soon! |
 saruke101 2007-08-24 . chapter 10omg what is gonna happen? please update soon!! |
 lovefatedestiny 2007-08-23 . chapter 10wtf! no they can't kill her! holy crud! please update soon! |
 SaiW.D.leader 2007-08-20 . chapter 2Great so far, just wanted you to know that samma(sama) means mister, one of my friends has a Japenese exchange student stay with them every year so she is fairly good at Japenese and told me this, she, another friend and I are writing Naruto fic. |
 lovefatedestiny 2007-08-19 . chapter 9aw she's gone! please update soon! |
 Wrist-Slap 2007-08-19 . chapter 2Hum…
Wow, she pants in parenthesis, that’s weird. Oh well, most Mary sues are given crazy extreme powers. I guess panting within parenthesis is just another ‘spechul’ add on. |
 saruke101 2007-08-19 . chapter 8good story i just read the whole thing well update soon and if its not to much trouble... could you please make the chapters longer? |
 Scalindar 2007-08-09 . chapter 6I think it just might turn into a dissaster for the group but itll be funny in the mean while. Good story and its progressing nicely. Hope to see more of the demons. |
 EverlastingBliss 2007-08-06 . chapter 5About why my name end in "bliss"...well...lets just say that it is the result of my friend's sugar-high predicament combined with chocolate...Interesting chapter, by the way. |
 Scalindar 2007-07-14 . chapter 4Very great chapter with plenty of info. I really like the way that this story is developing. I was supprised that the deamon has only 3 attacks though. Neat names though.I definetly hope you continue writing this. |
 EverlastingBliss 2007-07-12 . chapter 4jUst ignore my last question. The name of the demon sounds cool. |
 EverlastingBliss 2007-07-12 . chapter 3Is that why Akatsuki is after her? (thinking to self) XD |
 EverlastingBliss 2007-07-12 . chapter 2NarutoXOC... i like that. |