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Reviews For: It was love at first, then what happened?

puasluoma
2007-06-02
ch 7,
abuseaww!
Dai's Angel
2007-06-02
ch 7,
abusethat was great
willow314
2007-05-29
ch 3,
abuseI like the story. Keep it up. But I think instead of having Takeru and Hikari making out right off the bat, it would've been more romantic to have a gentle kiss. The making out can come later. ^_~ That's just my impression. Good job though. I look forward to more. ^_^
yAkArI-TaKaRi lUvEr
2007-05-28
ch 1,
abusei love your story finiish it please ok thanks bye (=
puasluoma
2007-05-26
ch 4,
abuselol that was nice!
puasluoma
2007-05-22
ch 3,
abuseaww update!!
Mystical-Dreamer57
2007-05-20
ch 2,
abuseHm. Not really what I expected the first chapters to be, but it was awesome. i liked it alot. Please update soon. I sense this is going to be partly tragic. Kari and TK forever
puasluoma
2007-05-19
ch 1,
abuseCOOL!! please update soon!, just a question, is it a takari? and is it a happy ending?
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