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| puasluoma 2007-06-02 ch 7, | abuseaww! |
| Dai's Angel 2007-06-02 ch 7, | abusethat was great |
| willow314 2007-05-29 ch 3, | abuseI like the story. Keep it up. But I think instead of having Takeru and Hikari making out right off the bat, it would've been more romantic to have a gentle kiss. The making out can come later. ^_~ That's just my impression. Good job though. I look forward to more. ^_^ |
| yAkArI-TaKaRi lUvEr 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abusei love your story finiish it please ok thanks bye (= |
| puasluoma 2007-05-26 ch 4, | abuselol that was nice! |
| puasluoma 2007-05-22 ch 3, | abuseaww update!! |
| Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-20 ch 2, | abuseHm. Not really what I expected the first chapters to be, but it was awesome. i liked it alot. Please update soon. I sense this is going to be partly tragic. Kari and TK forever |
| puasluoma 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseCOOL!! please update soon!, just a question, is it a takari? and is it a happy ending? |