This is a good read. I like it. I love Renji, he's complicated, and always overlooked.

i love renji. he's too overlooked. he's so complicated and tatooed and muscly.

That was just enjoyable. Seriously I haven't had that good of a time reading a fic in a while. Really nice, loved it.

intense...nice story...

I really enjoyed this. You have a wonderful way with words. Are you going to continue this?

Ooh. Intenseful.

Which is not a word, according to spell check. Myeh.

Thanks for the read.

Beutifully painted snapshots, rich in scene and the undercurrent behind it all. Loved the pacing.. and very nice work on Renji overall.
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This is really good. I especially love the last one - the way you described how Renji made up his mind xD