Nice story! Your layout of writing is almost like mine! Just to say, if you want to make someone say something in a language other than english, place the translated speech italicized. Other than that, good job.

PS: I reccommend you to read my story. Tell me how do you like it!

Coolness!

Lilo is creepy, almost as creepy as the miniature killer from CSI. But that's got nothing to do with Lilo and Stitch so I'm gonna shut up about it now. Anyway it looks promising and will probably be better than my 'Terminus' fic. update when you get the chance.