Kya~! How cute! >/<
Kira,Rin,Touya and Jin-O.O Ookay then!

Thanks for the reviews thus far, people. I am glad you like it.

However, miss. Lau, I asked for no crits if you cared to view the first and foremost bolded letters in the opening of the story (and I see no e-mail was left, so--meh). Description is what helps a story move--if you cannot handle the descriptions in a piece, maybe I am not your reading level. It takes more than dialog to make a scene move in a story, and it takes more than one action to do so as well unless the story is to be stiff and vague. In other words, you're asking me to go down in writing level. I don't want to do that--I want to be a better author who people can enjoy.

This fic is so sweet. I hope your significant other likes it. It's a little hard to follow some of it, though. Try not to put so much description into one sentence.

So sweet! Very well written!

Aww! That was such a charming fic! I have to say I give you points for writing a Jin and Touya fic, it is after all a rarity in itself. Your setting description at the beginning is what ensnared me and not may fics have a strong beginning, so I must applaud you for that as well. Anyways, I’ll be looking forward future works! xhugsx