Wow. Very good description. However, I find it hard to believe that Lester's last words would be "I love you", when we all know he very much doesn't love his wife. Maybe "I forgive you" or "Thank You" would have been better. But I love you doesn't work, because it's a lie.

Anyway, very good description. Enjoyed it immensely.

s.t.

I liked it, but you really need to set it up. People won't have just seen the movie, so we're not prepared for what you're offering. Do you know what I mean? Anyways, I hope you get my point, well done.

Erik Stouffer

Hey that was pretty amazing! AB is one of my top 3 favorite movies, and this was really good. It really touched me.

This was awesome. Wow. American Beauty is my favorite movie and if this had been the ending I still would've cried. Brilliant. Hope you do well with your writing.