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| caz1969 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseSo sweet! loved it |
| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Gil took Sara home. |
| csmit99 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this one hoping to see more chapters:) |
| redasarose 2007-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw...grissom's so sweet. |
| Forensic Nurse 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI love seeing the protective Grissom & I think that his guilt for her kidnapping is going to be an issue in Season 8. Good job! |
| heather 2007-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nice |
| Rainbow Stevie 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseM...well, the parallel is nice, but I wasn't fond of the shaving scene on the show, and I'm not fond of the one here, either. Just not my thing. I do, however, utterly adore everything else about this fic. The dialogue sounds perfectly natural, no awkward phrasing. I feel like I can really see this playing out - and I'm glad you chose not to linger in the hospital or skip straight to them being at home, but to focus on the journey in between points. It would have been so easy to gloss over in a single sentence, but instead I can feel the silence stretching out, and Sara's fruitless attempts to fill it. Once home, I very much like protective!Grissom, and the detail about the dog jumping up is fantastic. Overall, definitely one of the best post-eps so far. |
| ckofshadows 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI love how intimate this scene is... Grissom's concern and fear are so palpable, and I love how patient Sara is with him. Lovely work. |
| Peggiegg 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was a lovely look at what we all hope is the aftermath. Thanks for sharing it with us! |
| gsrshipper 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseCute. Well, I'm glad the finale produced such awesome fics. Thanks! |
| ayesha-s 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseoh that was so sweet!! love it!! |
| Akkalabeth 2007-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it... it gave me a conclusion for an awful cliffhanger, thanks! |
| jtbwriter 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! Thank you for a very sweet...and appropriate "what if?". I love that Gris's silence was his guilt in her injuries, and that Sara was able to comfort him in her own way! Good fic-thanks! |
| djkittycat 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis rocked :). Nice parallelism. Let's hope something like this happens on the show! |
| Mingsmommy 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseSIGH. Perfect. Thank you. |