First let me just say congrates on finishing an awsome fic and second all the haters who didn't like ur story should take their feet out of their arse! This was really good, I loved it,
to be totally honest I agree with LoveNote you should have kept the orginal ending It was much better then ur alternate one and if anyone has a problem with that then they can go kill themselves!
:3 I love the HaoxAnna pairing anyways I really though Anna was going to lose her mind...anyways I hope you continue to pull fics like this out the barrel because I would love to read more of your work. :)

*sniffs*
That was beautifully written ^_^
The fragile side of Anna that you portrayed was...(not exactly the word that should be used but) beautiful :]
I'm glad I read the whole story xD I'm a huge HaoxAnna fan but my little fantasy head never really let me imagine their relationship at this angle xD Gave me a new perspective.
Don't anyone try to murder me at night for saying this but I think I liked the original ending better o.o
It killed me inside Yoh wouldn't ever fully trust Anna again. Dx

Wow. That was... awesome. I really loved both endings :D And sorry for being like, 8 months late in reading this lolol I just finished my obsession over Shaman King, and I'm resorting to reading fanfics. Usually I don't support in-charx-in-char, but you've definitely made me change my mind. Absolutely loved it.

I really liked the ending even though it was extremely emo. This was a very good chapter and I hope you'll keep writing stories. (that last sentence I wrote was extremely corny and not like me at all o_O)

This is such a great story. I feel weird because i'm righting a review in the middle of the story that you'll probably not gonna see. Oh well, I still love this story!!

wow... this was very good.
I love the story so much.
i usually hate Anna but this fic actually makes me feel sorry 4 her. :O

You know what, in we don 't write for money. We write coz we wanna share with other people how we want to see certain characters. Sometimes people forget that and think, "Oh she's writing for me. Lets tell her what she should do to make me happier."

I liked both endings. They were really well written, completely brilliant. But I have to say as much as I'm obsessed with Yoh Anna, it didn't seem like you enjoyed writing this version of ending.

It was sweet, well plotted and nicely descriptive. But until and unless you enjoy doing something, it can never be as good as you're capable of.

So the only thing for me to do now is, *take shoot bazooka and shoots all flamers dead*

Yo. Nice to see an update! I'm surprised ppl were THAT angry over the whole Hao/Anna ending. Nobody was forced to read this story.

Personally I'm one of the few that actually likes Hao/Anna a little more than Yoh/Anna. So I think the original ending was alot better than the alternate. Especially since it had so much emotion involved... I could almost feel Anna's agony. *hugs her* Besides, Hao is kick azz! I luv bad guys.

But yeah, if you ever write a story similar to this don't let the flamers pressure you into writing an alternate ending. It's your story. Plenty Yoh/Anna fics out there for 'em. Enuf of my babbling tho, don't want anybody coming after me next. Lawlz!

Ciao...

Hmm, I like this ending better. Good job! ;)

Actually...I love the original ending so much than I hate this...I mean...it isn´t that bad but this one doesn´t have the emotional intensity of the original one. The fic has a lot of pasion but this alternate ending has not. I stay with the first.
I´m thinking it´s coz ya made this without feeling it. Just guesses. Not very important. See ya

very good. i applaud you for it. ^^

Oh my!...i´m one of the biggest fan of annaxyho but i have to say i just love it...it´s really difficult (i don´t wanna say imposible) to find an history like this...very angst with no happy ending...i must to say i get a kinda depress with it..ana it´s my favorite character ´coz we are kinda similar and read her fallin´that way it´s very...i don´t know...weird for saying in a way...so..i really anxious for the epilogue and i hope ti read you soon!!...
peace
pd: sorry for my gramar mistakes...english it´s not my first language

they should have a girl...

Oh god- I just read the reviews you got for this fic... You really shouldn't pay attention to stupid people who really think a story always has to end with the typical and they lived happily ever after cliché. Geez, I just can't believe how idiotic some people can be. I have to say I really liked your fic very much. Did you ever post a chapter 11?, cause some reviews say chapter 11 and I would really like to know... Don't let those morons let you down, you're a really great writer, I loved the story and the ending made a lot more sense than having Yoh forgiving Anna and pretending as if nothing ever happened with Hao. I really enjoyed reading your story, it made me sob a little and smile at times. It was a really awesome fic...

Hi...just wanted you to know i loved your story, that is..until 2 chapters ago, where you brutally murdered the story pairing and contorted it into one i am completely for, but i preferred Yoa x Anna. But heres the critic part (until here i was just neutral): You killed my Anna, destroyed Yoh and his dreams(I know you dont like him but you shouldnt have chose the pairings then), and most of all, shattered by dreams of a happy ending.
Well, i guess it was meant to be happy, but im sorry i cannot see how Anna succumbing to Haos will and Yoh dying is a good ending. I think ill move on to another author, cuz even if it started out well, you practically went against your own fic and ruined it so bad. Hope you learn from your mistakes and for your fans sake keep the story to its pairing!