*Zannah* Aw... that was really sweet!I have a bit of a soft spot for Sora and Riku, and this is great!

You did a splendid job. Both with Soriku and with the lemon ^^ It's rare to read about relaistic sex nowadays...
And it had so much fluff

awesomeness

Very nice writing indeed. I loved it sweetness.
Totally faving this!

i really, really liked this. nicely done. well written and not drawn out or rushed, the perfect pace. wasn't crazy about the last line, but beggars can't be choosers.

aw the fluff...i love the fluff. to hell with the others, i love the sweetness. and it wasn't OOC, which actually surprised me, most on this site change the characters to thier own liking. which isn't bad, that's part of the reason they came here. ahh, im babbling. anyway, good story and vocabulary. :)

Ooh, that was the perfect mix of smut and fluff for me. >.> haha - the ending sentence was my favorite. =]

M...yummy yaoi goodness. This was very well-crafted and I think you got their personalities down great. It was a great idea for a little oneshot and I love that the sea could just wash away all the evidence because the tide was coming in. :squee:

--NS

Aww! So dirty and cute at the same time! I loved it. Riku and Sora are just perfect for each other and you wrote it so well. Good job!
-Gwen-

Aw, this story was perfect. I think you did a good job keeping them in character and the lemon was very citrus-y but not smutty. It's too bad they didn't have a blanket though cause now they're gonna be dealing with sand in difficult areas for at least a week. ^_^ Keep up the good work!

aww, so sweet!

I love it! Fav-ing this!

Good Job!
~Zellie~

...S-so cute T_T That was sweet and 'aww'-worthy and all sorts of yummy goodness! *bows and praises* I love the idea of all the 'kids' sleeping over on the island XD Great work, loved your writing! Keep up the awesome job

that was so hott! ♀♥♀

kimi

Really? Your first Riku/Sora lemon? You're so good at it! It's as if it was the real ending of KH2! You're a natural at this!! I can not praise you enough! You write so great!! You just made it to my favorites! I love the way you write and I can't wait to see more of your workings!!
Hi-chan