This marks a brilliant ending to the entire saga. I very much enjoyed reading it. It was absolutely wonderful, seriously. It was nice to see such a joyous conclusion to the whole series.

Long live Team Thunderbolt indeed.

Well, I never imagined that Giovanni would die in such a way, and I thought that Ash would manage to get him out in time. However, this way seems much more fitting, especially since Giovanni deserved to die for the pain that he caused. The aftermath was handled very well, and I especially love the Team Thunderbolt motto.

The battle between Ash and Giovanni was AWESOME. I enjoyed it immensely, and I can't wait to find out if he finally meets his very just fate.

This was easily one of my favourite chapters of the whole lot. I enjoyed all of the battle scenes immensely, particularly Jessie and Mondo's. It was very interesting to see her face off against the man who could have saved Miya, and I definitely wasn't expecting his refusal to betray Giovanni to have something to do with love for him. It was very dramatic.

And now the showdown between Ash and Giovanni is about to begin...I can hardly wait to read on.

Wow, James' revenge was really violent. I'm sad that it didn't make him feel better after he's hungered for it for so long, but at least he has Jessie there to pull him through.

And they're attacking tomorrow? I definitely can't wait to read on now.

Giovanni sure has some messed up ideas, what with his 'perfect order' stuff. Those poor people, I feel for Ash and the others having to witness it but being able to do nothing about it. And now James is going out for revenge against Butch and Cassidy. I hope he makes it through to the other side intact.

Wow, the story of Miyamoto's past was very intense. I enjoyed it immensely. Yay for Brock and Joy getting engaged - hopefully they can have a nice wedding when the war is over. And Ash's new strategy sounds very dangerous.

Glad everyone got out okay. This was yet another dramatic chapter that had everything. I was on the edge of my seat all the way through, not able to read quick enough. Awesome.

I loved it from beginning to end. 10 out of 10. perfect.

Wow, this is just...epic! I love the elements that you've blended together, lil bit or romance, a good amount of adventure and drama. Just awesome. Although I do need to admit that I wasn't fond of Joy/Mewtwo Pairing. The slash was something I handled only because it was a loyal/servant/friend kinda thing and never acted upon. (I'm not fond of gay action) Thankfully 'That' wasn't in there.

All in all a truly wondrous piece.

Great tale Ben!

Well! I believe your four hour estimate is a bit short. It took me about 6 total, not counting the time I spent eating, driving, moving, and playing Doom. (What? I'm retro like that.) And I'm one of the fastest readers I've ever met or heard of. So... yeah. That's obviously not a bad thing. Moving on. Why haven't you done anything with those ideas bouncing around? You are, undoubtedly, an excellent writer, and I'm pretty sure people would love to read it. But according to my records (on fanfiction) you haven't written anything for Pokemon since 2003! Or perhaps I should say "haven't published" since I don't know that for certain. You've certainly kept busy, as your many other works have shown, but... did you just stop caring about Pokemon? I don't suppose I could blame you if you did. Change is the only constant.

This story, like the rest, was excellent. I really can say that I was saddened when I read that you might do sequels, only to see that there were none when I looked. Oh! That reminds me, for some reason. One of the stories, I think the first, had a point when someone received the text "flak :-(". I laughed so hard at that sad face that I thought I would throw up. There were all sorts of little jokes like that, all through this, that just made me Explode with laughter. Great. All in all, I think that the quarter of a day I spent reading this saga was time extremely poorly spent. I could have done so many useful things instead. BUT, I'm very glad I wasted my time instead, because these stories were very, very good. I only wish you had wrote sequels. For the final time, thank you, sir, for writing this superb series.

"Servants of the fallen

Fight to make the way

For the savior's calling

On this wicked day

Through a veil of madness

With a vicious play

One man marches on

Standing in their way.

Redemption!

Redemption for humanity!"

Sincerely,

James

Simply amazing! This by far was my most favorite of the series and I am so happy that everyone came out of it okay in the end. I also loved the Star Wars backstory and thought you merged the ideas of Pokemon and Star Wars quite well. Congrats and thanks for this lovely story!

Great story. I loved it. All three books. You should continue it. Does Ask and Misty get married? What happened to Nikki and the other freed slaves? Will they stay good?

It's been years since this was completed. Yet I just stumbled across it a week ago and couldn't stop reading. Now I would really like to read the rest of this saga. It is a pitty that I probably won't as it looks like it's been abandoned. If you ever decide to pick it up again I know there are quite a few out there that would very much appreciate it.

When is book four of the excellent avenger's coming out as I want to be the first to read it on my computer and I still think you should continue with you're pokemon story called "the journey" maybe you could combine the two together.

Happy Xmas and New Year

Zapdos Articuno