hehe, im still cool beyond cool

Nice sweet little poem. You should do more.

The apple tree comparison was really good and you should continue more!

Lovely, you have great themes for these poems.

Interesting, especially the part about Lavender. XD

ooh, this one was a cool one, I love the connection between them and the apple tree (:

quite good, liked the apple tree one nice concept rather clever.

ha im cool beyond cool! LOL rly lurv tohe poem, could u make th lines longer?

father...
who?
awsum

kewl. luv the last bit..

hey, this is rly cool

Oth book coming up! Huh? OH a poem? Looks like it makes Ron a doofus!☺☻♥

haha that one was cute XD i liked the closing with, " i need to think some more." and yeah i think ron did it just to get to hermione..haha.

Okay...we all are not so sure that we even know that this is something about Harry's mother, Lily. Jmaes's love for Lily when they were just little teens. It sounds like any odd copule in Hogwarts you know~ ah oh well...sounds very romantically but kind of hard to imagine her real image with the words..looks kind of rushed Ano...

COL!