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| masaki yang yi1 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseVery funny but you could use a few more chapters to make it even more so |
| Reviewer of the West 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abuseNice start Please continue. |
| Fluffy 2007-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuse*grubble?* urk...i think my brain just twisted backwards...man that's an ODD idea...but strangely functional. I can hardly wait to see you explain Ranma's immortality. |
| Wonderbee31 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseHmm, well this looks interesting indeed, and looking forward to what might come of all this in the future and past. |
| ranma hibiki 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseO_O this...is so wierd! *clutches head* if ranma was sent back in time, AND he was seen in the present. then he is not his own ancestor..but the older ranma could have been the one who sealed aku into the rock and got sent back to...ARG! solution. stop thinking and ask for more update! |
| Campin' Carl 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThis seems really rushed. I'm not saying it could be chapters, but that whole beginning could have been done MUCH better. I'd say it was nowhere near the kind of quality you normally write. Everything just happened at once. |
| Krimzonrayne 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. You're coming along amazingly well... that makes it what? Five fics in a month? And your style... you attempt and more often than not succeeds at crossovers that I wouldn't touch with a ten foot pole. Over all, a nice start to a potentially really good fic... not exactly on par with Wild Magic but then again, it would be hard press to find an active story that's as good as that one. |
| Nysk 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseWhat a very entertaining idea you have here. with him thrown back in time there will be many opportunities to have Ranma learn many things and to meet up with MANY characters.. as well as occasional glimpses into what is happening NOW in the preset. This idea has MANY interesting opportunities. I do hope you explore this story further. |
| Gangsta Spanksta 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuse:) Great to see that you got the style punctuation down now; it does add flavor to your story, and makes you a better writer. |
| Viking Girl 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseEww. I love your other stories so much, but I gotta say this one is a bit of a stinker. I hope you spend more time on Take the Green and Go, Genius and Ditz and Wild magic than this. |
| Upgrade 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseNow this is a concept I don't see everyday. Excellent. And well written, too. I want more! |
| Dumbledork 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent start ot what promises to be another succulent story. Can't wait for more. |
| Ranryuujin Omega 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis has potential, after all I've rarely, if ever, seen a Ranma/Samurai Jack crossover. I hope you update again soon... |
| majinbuu7985 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseGood start to what looks like a good story. Samurai Jack is my favorite non-anime cartoon (I really wish they would bring it back,) and am looking forward to more of this story. Please finish some of your other stories before writing anymore, otherwise you may get swamped and never finish them. (I still have about 30 anime's and video games in my collection I have yet to watch.) A suggestion I have for a new technique that Ranma makes it a Chestnut fist slash attack, a name I liked for it was the Kuhazan (high-speed kill), I got the name from Star Ocean EX. Looking forward to more of this, and if I had to suggest which stories you should stick with until finished first it would be "Take the Green and Go" and "Wild Magic." Later. |