Dude, I just realized how long it BEEN since I played Tekken. XDD
Doesn't help that, through some freak accident, my memory card got erased and I had to start over again. I had all the characters, too. D:

This definitely leaves the reader wondering. ^^

This is quite good but you could have added a bit more detail but other than that, it's fine xD

Short but sweet =)

I like it Jin/Julia fans are cool.

Hm...I prefer Hwoarang with Julia, but, it's ok. Anyways, your fic. If you'd included more descriptions, I think this short oneshot would have been much better. I get the idea of the whole thing, but your sentence structure is always the same: subject + verb. For example: "I awake in his arms. I look at him...I shake...I touch..." etc. It's ok to do that once in awhile, but you do this a bit too much here. It gets boring. For instance, you simply describe Jin as "beautiful" and angelic. Well, HOW is he this way? Show instead of tell. Show us his beauty. Show us Julia's emotions. Show us the mirage instead of telling us about it.

It's an ok start. Keep writing. It's the only way to improve. ~Sage Pagan

too short :(
anyways nice
umm, check out my story when ug ot the time its called TEKKEN: HEROES

Nice emotional little piece. I can see you've done some growing as a writer. ^_^

Cute. Evn though it was short it was still cute.

Wow, this is simply marvelous! It's so well written, but the thing that got me mad was that it's a one shot and it was so short! Yeah it's very short but very good! I hope you can make more like this! Wow, my first time reading a JinJulia fic, I'm usually the HwoarangJulia shipper but you made me fall in love with this pairing! Hm. I must be crazy for liking a story that is only like a paragraph but it was cool. Well anyways keep up the good work! :D