I just wanted to point out that Will's mother's name is Vy Smith. ;) Otherwise, I find this story very interesting.

what kind of ten year olds afraid of the boogie man

hey! keep writing the fresh prince well done you are really good ;) keep going plz Jawwdenn

I like the story but your lyrics are wrong. it goes like this.


You feel like a candle in a hurricane
Just like a picture with a broken frame
All alone and helpless like you lost your fight
But youll be alright, youll be alright.

and so on.

i need u to update for me and the rest of your reviewers. thank you, it has been a pleasure doin business with ya!! lol

hey good 2nd chapter but one question where's will's mom?? u may want to include her in the further chapters cuz it seems a little strange that her son is seriously injured and she isnt there...and also lisa, wills fiance, should be there...

Oh, poor Will might be going into a coma!! :( Please update soon! I gotta know what happens!!

hey good story update ASAP