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| Dessler 2007-11-12 ch 8, | abuseOk, maybe you should get facts straight before you put them into a story.. Mormons ARE Christians.. They believe in Jesus Christ and they do NOT worship Mormon.. Please study before you make a comment that only shows your ignorance.. |
| peachjr37 2007-11-12 ch 9, | abuseI liked the ending! Good job!! |
| xXBlissfulCursesXx 2007-11-11 ch 9, | abuseAw... |
| LivNel4ever 2007-10-20 ch 8, | abuseOmg that was an evil chapter ending...This story is pretty good so far! I'm wasn't going to read it because i have never watched Rains (is that it?) but i'm glad i decided to anyway because even though i don't know much about the other show, you made it so that you didn't have to know. Plus is was EO goodness...however with this Kathy thing-well that is going to be interesting! |
| DivaLola 2007-09-18 ch 7, | abusewhat a cliffhanger...can't wait to find out what happens! I hope they are both ok! GREAT STORY AND WRITING! |
| xXBlissfulCursesXx 2007-09-15 ch 7, | abuseOmg!! Please post more soon! |
| Danibanixx 2007-09-15 ch 7, | abuseWOW! update soon! |
| Marie2185 2007-09-15 ch 7, | abusei forgot about this story please update soon i hope elliot is okay |
| xXBlissfulCursesXx 2007-08-23 ch 6, | abuseDon't make me hate you! I like this story - I really don't want to hate you. Much love and unhatefulness, xXBlissfulCursesXx |
| Marie2185 2007-08-14 ch 6, | abusewow that is so great finally having a understanding.please update soon |
| MariposaAngel18 2007-08-13 ch 6, | abuseJust please keep Liv away from Raines. Elliot is her soul-mate not that joker. EO 4 EVER |
| Ad Hominem Argument 2007-08-03 ch 5, | abuseI was perfectly fine with them sharing a sweet kiss... Forget Raines... That show was pointless anyway! Good job, can't wait for the update! Hominem |
| Marie2185 2007-07-31 ch 5, | abusethat was good just a lil over due please update soon |
| MaryWhite 2007-07-31 ch 5, | abuseOh tell me he like does something crazy or scandelous that hurts Olivia. LOL! I love angsts/love stories as you can tell from my fiction. That would be awesome. Nice chapter and I cannot wait to read what you have in store for our 2 favorite detectives. |
| peachjr37 2007-07-30 ch 5, | abuseThis is so good! I can't wait to see what you do with it!! |