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Dessler
2007-11-12
ch 8,
abuseOk, maybe you should get facts straight before you put them into a story.. Mormons ARE Christians.. They believe in Jesus Christ and they do NOT worship Mormon.. Please study before you make a comment that only shows your ignorance..
peachjr37
2007-11-12
ch 9,
abuseI liked the ending! Good job!!
xXBlissfulCursesXx
2007-11-11
ch 9,
abuseAw...
LivNel4ever
2007-10-20
ch 8,
abuseOmg that was an evil chapter ending...This story is pretty good so far! I'm wasn't going to read it because i have never watched Rains (is that it?) but i'm glad i decided to anyway because even though i don't know much about the other show, you made it so that you didn't have to know. Plus is was EO goodness...however with this Kathy thing-well that is going to be interesting!
DivaLola
2007-09-18
ch 7,
abusewhat a cliffhanger...can't wait to find out what happens! I hope they are both ok! GREAT STORY AND WRITING!
xXBlissfulCursesXx
2007-09-15
ch 7,
abuseOmg!! Please post more soon!
Danibanixx
2007-09-15
ch 7,
abuseWOW! update soon!
Marie2185
2007-09-15
ch 7,
abusei forgot about this story please update soon i hope elliot is okay
xXBlissfulCursesXx
2007-08-23
ch 6,
abuseDon't make me hate you! I like this story - I really don't want to hate you.

Much love and unhatefulness,
xXBlissfulCursesXx
Marie2185
2007-08-14
ch 6,
abusewow that is so great finally having a understanding.please update soon
MariposaAngel18
2007-08-13
ch 6,
abuseJust please keep Liv away from Raines. Elliot is her soul-mate not that joker. EO 4 EVER
Ad Hominem Argument
2007-08-03
ch 5,
abuseI was perfectly fine with them sharing a sweet kiss... Forget Raines... That show was pointless anyway! Good job, can't wait for the update!
Hominem
Marie2185
2007-07-31
ch 5,
abusethat was good just a lil over due please update soon
MaryWhite
2007-07-31
ch 5,
abuseOh tell me he like does something crazy or scandelous that hurts Olivia. LOL! I love angsts/love stories as you can tell from my fiction. That would be awesome.

Nice chapter and I cannot wait to read what you have in store for our 2 favorite detectives.
peachjr37
2007-07-30
ch 5,
abuseThis is so good! I can't wait to see what you do with it!!
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