Well, I enjoyed this story. I love the ending with Wonder Girl and Krystal's antics are always hilarious.

I don’t know why, but this story reminds me of a movie or something.

I thought this was good...

you really should expect (modest anyway) 0-3 reviews/chapter if you gave like 1-2 days delay between each and made it like a normal fic with waiting for a completed anime series fanfic, but with one day complete fics, although its nice for the reader (thank you so much btw), I doubt you will get a considerable amount of reviews "piling" up immediately simply because instead of reviewing, we go on and finish reading, then a percentage of people are too lazy to review.

I really wish your stories had 18 or more reviews/fic though, because they are really well written.

hope you have a nice day.

-noian

You requested reviews so...
First of all, I didn't even read past the first chapter. Why? Well, there were several warning signs that made me back off.

First; your disclaimer shouldn't really be a separate first chapter. Most people put tuck it in the same post as the first chapter. Also, longwinded disclaimers can be annoying (even though I am guilty of them too). That's okay when it's tagged on to the beginning of the chapter, because if people don't want to read it, they can just scroll down. Having it as a separate chapter is just annoying, and it may get your fic reported and taken down, as I'm pretty sure it's against one of FF.N's rules (of course most people ignore the rules, but if you're breaking a rule, at least be aware of it and make sure it's worth it. Actually, I have a separate account for all my fics that "break the rules" so that if I get reported, my main account isn't shut down)

Second, maybe it's not that big of a deal, but it's a pet peeve of mine; you wrote the character's dialogue in script format. I just don't see the point. Don't get me wrong; pure script format is more annoying, but it seems to me that if you take the time to write the scenes out in paragraph format, it would be easy to put 'said' after a character's name and a couple of quotation marks around their dialogue.
I could probably write a better review if I actually read the fic, but it's become impossible for me to read script format fics without trying to claw my eyes out.

The reason for this is (note; Teen Titans is not my main fandom, I read mostly Harry Potter and Naruto and drabble in others. My point; TT section might be different from Naru and HP; it's not my forte, so I don't know) most fics I've seen written in scrip format are written by thirteen year olds because they have nothing better to do and are bad. Like, really, really, really bad. Hiss-scream-gourge-out-eyes-with-rusty-spoon-exersism-needed-KILL-ME-NOW level bad. If the fic in question involves smut, then the author is most likely closer to eight years old, and the fic is twenty billion times worse. Especially if it's slash. This is not a flame; I saying this because you said you never got any reviews. I'm telling you that your format sends people running. Try paragraph format and see if more people review.

Thank you for posting the last chapters. MrSarcastic is a confusing name, but it also prompts people to think. Besides it sounds better than MrWitticism. I promise you can take what I say at face value! Looking forward to the next story.

I'm tired of waiting, I require the remainder of the story. Please.