I thought it was amazing. You did an great job and it abvious that Tenchi loved Ryoko. I am a big fan of Ryoko. Your story helped me understand a lot of things. Allthough i think is kinda weird that Washu now wants Yosho but it was understanding. Alos if you could, can you make another story about Ryoko and Washu. I love the characters so much. Also you could put parts where it tells about about Washu's first child and who the father was. Any way to get to the point ILOVE YOUR STOY AND I ENCURAGE YOU TO KEEP WRITTIN.

I completely agree. This is the most IC I've ever seen Washu being in a fanfiction. She's HORRIBLE to Ryoko. The one time when she showed motherly concern towards Ryoko was when it...wasn't Ryoko. It was Zero and Clay was doing something to her, and Washu gasped "Ryoko" worriedly. This came right after she said something along the lines of "oh, good thing you didn't kidnap Ayeka or someone important" when she saw the REAL Ryoko in the tank. That was the moment I knew I really disliked Washu. Up until that point I had enjoyed her. So good on you for showing how she really is.

WOW! and i mean it! WOW! It's just awsome... gaps in awe... O_O

I have to congradulate you for an excellent use of Freudian psychology in this chapter, it's breathtaking...

This is GREAT! You really should continue it!

Ja ne!

*bows* I worship you. Your writing skills are AMAZING! I'm in awe! This was such a great story...you RULE, my friend, at Tenchi/Ryoko stories...and I LOVE the mother/daughter of Washu & Ryoko...you brought that out really well! YOU RULE, YOU ROCK! I HOPE YOU CONTUINE TO WRITE TENCHI STORIES FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND...*2 hourA later*...AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER...*more people in white coats drag her away* ...AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER...

interesting :b

Um...What's the html to Ryoko's Cave...that would help just a little bit... Very good story! please have Yosho and Ryoko bond a bit more, I liked that part! Very good story! Original! More please!

I really like the ending where Yosho goes through what Tenchi went through.

Wonderful! I'm sure my mother thinks I'm crazy for laughing so hard at particular scenes of this. Mihoshi and the pickles!

AWESOME ending

BEAUTIFUL. I DIDN'T KNOW THAT WASHU WOULD FIGHT FOR YOSHO. LIKE MOTHER LIKE DAUGHTER HUH? I LOVE IT.

Great chapter! I hope that you make a sequel to this fic!

This story is absolutely wonderful. I've sat here and actually read it word for word instead of reading fast like I usually do. You're dealing with the reape scene very well. Most people would rather you emphasize the heartache and distress rather than the scene itself. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

a little shortened at the end, but i really really like this so far. usually i dont' like things with rape, but i do like things that delve into the whole kagato and ryoko stuff... it was well written too, but i hope washu and ryoko make up! (well, sorta make up... argh, i make no sense at 3am!) but it was very good! let me know when the next chapter is up!