 MythStar Black Dragon 2009-10-06 . chapter 9I emjoyed it can't wait to read more when you can write more
maria |
 ShakespeareActressVamp 2009-09-27 . chapter 9Love this story and I am so glad you updated! :) Please update again soon! The only thing I ask for is that Zuko comes to love Katara and frees her and they get married, o and I miss Iroh! Thanks tons and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
~Victoria~ |
 silver-nightstorm 2009-09-13 . chapter 9I like the story so far :) Very angsty :D Have fun in the Navy!
~Skry~ |
 HPfangirlie 2009-09-13 . chapter 9OMG! I'm so, so happy you updated again! I was afraid you'd abandoned this story. Love it! |
 ArrayePL 2009-09-13 . chapter 9Will you bring this story to an end? |
 Ten'N'Ten 2009-08-25 . chapter 7MORE! |
 Whatever-life24 2009-07-26 . chapter 7Poor Aang :(
Iroh is awesome! |
 Miriri 2009-07-11 . chapter 7 Kya~ >_< It's too bad this fanfiction looks so discontinued (from the last update...) because this has easily become my favourite zutara fiction. I'm tired of how so many other fictions completely skip the "I hate you" stage between Katara and Zuko. So, yeah, you did a great job. Everybody seems in character, too--especially Toph, if I do say so myself.
You know, Chen and Old Mama remind me of two characters from Spirited Away, which I love about them. x3
Anyways, I hope you find motivation to start writing this fanfic again! Don't worry, us readers won't bite. D: |
 hoho 2009-06-30 . chapter 7 Wow! Ive never read a fanfiction before, but i LOVE this! I stayed up until like midnight reading this. Im a major zuko fan and i dont enjoy him torturing katara(even though shes by far my least favorite) but i have to say it makes the story interesting. The way you explain everything is amazing. Its so intense! I cant stop reading, i have to know what happens next!
Keep up the good work, ill be waiting for more!
PS I really would like to know when you will be posting the rest. Long live the Fire Nation! |
 edwardismyvampiresweetheart 2009-05-12 . chapter 7 hi sorry my review was so small i have finals coming up and they are very hard i have to study 23/7 the one other hour i use four fan-fiction so i really like your story i especially loved the part when you said " “Perfectly, ” Jie said " hah it was so funny! i loved it
~edwardismyvampiresweetheart |
 edwardismyvampiresweetheart 2009-05-11 . chapter 7are you going to cont with this? i like thuis story plz cont! |
 Azula'sbiggestfan 2009-04-19 . chapter 7 Great story love it but i just wanna know why Katara doesn't use her blood bending to stop people from hurting her like she did in the souther raiders episode of book 3 |
 scooter 2009-02-21 . chapter 7 beautiful |
 Rizzz 2008-09-25 . chapter 7*sigh* For a second there I though that Jie guy will be the one to take Katara's innocence which will be even worse because she's unconscious, yay!! for Zuko! By the way I just realize this is Katara a master bender here like in the show (but she's not just showing her skills because she's not allowed to waterbend) or a just a waterbender who knows water bending ^^
PS: I just read your mail and thanks a lot for answering my questions, also when you said "my page" does that meant your profile? Because I can't see the link there, also in your FFP account I can't find it (I even use @find on both) >_< I'm sorry if I'm slow T__T |
 Rizzz 2008-09-25 . chapter 6Another event to make this story even darker which is fine with me ^_^ I got to say your a really awesome writer after I read each chapter the story just draws me deeper and deeper into the plot. In another term this story just gets better and better every time I read it =D
PS: Toph is so cool! |