 IheartPadalecki 2007-07-23 . chapter 1Gah loved this. I am really depressed about AHBL 2 still... but this made me feel better ;D |
 MJ2901 2007-06-16 . chapter 1I always enjoy your Brotherhood AU stories. I love the characters you have created and the dimensions that you have added to the existing characters.
Think this is a great tag to the season finale and can't wait to see what Caleb's reaction to the deal is. |
 Becomingwhaturmeantobe 2007-06-02 . chapter 1I was waiting for this fic for so long but I never once checked your page because I thought I would get some kind of email or something letting me know that you updated something. Of course I finally checked and there it was. You definitely didn't disappoint, in fact it was better than I could have imagined. Actually, lol, there was one point when I was watching the finale when it occured to me the reaction Caleb would have. That's how much I am drawn into these AU, it's really excellent. I can't wait for Caleb's reaction and how everything turns out. I love Caleb and how much he cares for them and I think just finding out that Sam was dead would kill him but then finding out what Dean did to bring him back would just be so...whoa. That's all I can say about it and like I said I can't wait to see how he finds out. So, thanks for writing this, it was amazing as usual and I hope you update with something soon. |
 sams1ra 2007-05-28 . chapter 1First of all, let me say, I don't believe you can write a fic that's too long or updated too often. (hint hint)
“Hot damn, Deuce!” Caleb fiercely pounded the younger man’s back, squeezed him hard. “I’m so ** proud of you, Kiddo.” Totally got teary eyed over that one.
I liked the photo albums - that they existed almost as much as the way they were (ab)used ;)
“Don’t give me that look, old girl. I promised Dean I wouldn’t tell, Caleb.” Bobby punched in Mackland Ames’s number. “I didn’t say one damn thing about not telling The Scholar.” Yay Bobby!
Although, I think he should've done that sooner. You are gonna write a Brotherhood spin on the whole Bobby-Dean talk after Bobby had found out, right? And why didn't Bobby report that whole 'Then let it end!' thing back to Mac? Please write that one, it's begging to be written.
Colt was a Scholar? Not sure I like that twist, but I trust you.
Oh, and have I mentioned how much I love your fics? And how much I just can't get enough of them? I know I've been slacking on the reviews lately, but it doesn't mean I'm not looking forward to every update! Good job! |
 winchesterfan 2007-05-27 . chapter 1 A big thank you to both you and Tidia for the brotherhood stories. They are smart, thought provoking, and extremely well written. My teenage daughter got me hooked on this and we both look forward to every single story. I am a busy professional and this is the first reading for fun I have done in almost 20 years. You give us a much needed inside look at the characters we see every week. But you have also created an additional group of people we can't help but care about almost as much as Sam and Dean. It will be just as hard waiting for the next installment in these stories as it will be waiting for the start of season 3 -- probably harder. Please don't leave us hanging too long waiting for Caleb to find out about Dean's bargain. I can't imagine how much time it must take for your folks to pull these wonderful tales together, but please know that every single minute is appreciated by your readers. |
 Dit 2007-05-24 . chapter 1I had hoped you would write something like this- I was so curious to see how the Brotherhood would react. Love this. Truely love this!
Dit aka Ditzyleo |
 Fanfic Lover 4evr 2007-05-23 . chapter 1I'm amazed at the characters you've created and managed to center around the actual show. The brotherhood is also an intriguing factor to your fanfiction.
I enjoy the earlier stories very much, and I just thought I drop you a line or two... or more than two.
-Great Job, and I hope to see more soon |
 SilverKitsune1 2007-05-22 . chapter 1“There’s Orion.” Dean pointed to the star-filled sky.
It was fitting the hunter constellation was watching over them.
That last line almost had me in tears. This was such a wonderful after battle story!
I like how Caleb is sensing that something is rather..off with Sam, Missouri is alwasy a joy to see, and Sam's talk with Bobby was so touching. |
 irismay42 2007-05-22 . chapter 1Gah! Hasn't Dean realised how destructive secrets can be? He needs to tell Caleb - like - yesterday!
I really liked how you wrote Bobby in this story, and love the idea of Missouri and Ellen getting some interaction - be great if that happened in the 'real' series!
Should be interesting to find out what Mac thinks of Dean's actions... And the whole Samuel Colt story was intriguing...! |
 Tober Joy 2007-05-22 . chapter 1oh, man. I can't think of anything to say I haven't said before! this entire AU is too awesome for me to articulate properly. my SPN world will never be complete without these stories ever, ever again. you've brought such a sense of family with all this...it's unbelievable. it's a beautiful thing. ^_^
love, love and more love times 100. |
 pengwin-jibberish 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Okay so I admit one of my first thoughts after the finale was how the Brotherhood was going to react to Dean's deal with the crossroads demon. Yes I am completely obsessed. |
 angel679 2007-05-21 . chapter 1I can't decide wether to sob uncontrollably or run to the bathroom and be sick. Just reading about the boys and Bobby trying to keep this secret from everyone and then Dean being absolutely terrified that Missouri or Caleb will sense it or figure it out has my stomach tied in knots.. I'm so glad Bobby found his own little loop hole and Mac is going to ** a brick. What's even worse is Mac is in a bad situation if he doesn't tell Caleb, oh God I don't even won't to go there and if he does he has to worry about what Caleb will do to try and get Dean out of it. Plus all the worry about Sam is stressing me way the hell out. As for Ellen someone did make the comment on on of the lj's I read that the YED was not hurt by holy water and Ellen's surviving could be connected and holy water may not hurt her for the same reasons it didn't hurt John when he was possessed. I'm looking forward to more stories. |
 friendly 2007-05-21 . chapter 1awesome start.. I can't wait for more |
 Berserker Nightwitch 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Wow... This one was amazing! I liked the extra 'sensitive' portions of this story. It really seems like something that should happen when a major event like that occurs. I can't wait to read more! |
 NathMG 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Ok you're right. This was probably not the best time for Caleb to find out, but God, it's still driving me insane. I'm sure it will be quite explosive myself, even better than Sam figuring it out in AHBL2.
I really loved the scene betwen Bobby and Sam, and I'm really glad he's going to tell Mac about what happened. And I'm really happy that you've been able to weave in the season finale into your Universe. I'm so excited about reading To The Victor Goes The Spoils. Hope you begin posting soon. This summer is going to be so awesome. With Season 3 to look forward to and the promise of all of your wonderful stories yet to come, it's going to be damn near perfect. |