Sad. Regrets always happen. When pride takes over love, everything becomes wrong. Definitely. This is so sad. Or should I say heart breaking, sorrowful, depressing, tearful.

I hate tragic ending, but I love reading it. TT_TT

Thank you for making an awesome story.
I need quite some time crying.

-N.H.-

I—I dunno what to say... That was so touching... ;–;

Well who knows just one chapter gonna makeme cry like that

This story is so on my list

I like crying , because when i cry i don't pity myself

I like story that make me cry and laugh hehehe

Thx

I was touched by this story. It seemed so sad, and it hit me like a fireball. Well, that's ironic.

Anyways, a good one-shot. You have expressed his overpowering emotions greatly, up to a certain extent and it...suits this story. Good job and well done :)

Good luck with your next stories and keep writing, though I'm surprised that you haven't gotten much reviews :)

huwaaa! i was sooo close to tears. you really are GOOD! wait, no you are great! i love it! "I always did like that smile of yours"! *sobs*

This is a really nice story made with heart.

Holy crap. You better have won the Nobel prize for this, else the world is insane. -.-

HOLY CRAP. In a metaphorical sense, this piece was the dynamite to which was placed quite conveniently in my brain, and exploded into pieces when I finished reading how awesome it was. Not to matter, really. The sadness of the story was bound to make my mind go mentally berserk anyways.

But more importantly, this was one of your FIRST stories. O.O What are you saying, that they aren't good? This is amazing! And it literally made me cry, despite myself not having much of a personal connection to the NatsumexMikan pairing.

If this is bad, I don't know what to call my writing.

Natsume is dead. Me ish very sad now.

"I always did like that smile of yours."

Well. I will go cry myself to sleep now.

You know this is the first time i've ever cried this hard. Thank you for making a story like this. I was moved and I will say thank you again that you made a very sad, and emotional story. Good job and keep the nice works going! :) :'(

it's so sad... TTTT

make him come back! he needs to shred the letters! TTTT

This is so sad... I can't believe it... Natsume's gone. THE Hyuuga Natsume is gone, and a heartbroken Sakura Mikan is there, probably wishing he was there, alive and well. :( But I love this story. :)

This story really moved me. I was actually planning on writing a story similar to this, but not entirely the same, before I even get to read this. And you inspired me more. Very fast-paced and I consider that nice. You could have added more details especially to the action part though. More breath-taking, more action-drama element. All in all, hats off to you! I love this bittersweet story.

Kaku koto ni tamotsu! \m/

it's nice- Really. I like it

Love is something I just dont understand. I read about it, and I hear about it, but I never quite understand it.

I think that this story has kind of given me a better thought of what love is, so thank you.

Kristen

so sad made me cry...

i love it!

I loved it, it was short and sweet