LOVE the story so far and hope you plan on coming back to it since it has been since 07 since you last updated it. as to the pairing stuff asked about in the a/n stuff at the start of this chapter the only one I think would make ANY since to see a pairing with/between at this point MIGHT be alice and remus -- since they are the same age. the whole idea of pairing alice and evan/harry is sick, she's his godmother for goodness sakes! I never did or do i get the whole 'harry and tonks' thing..yeah she's cute but that's as bad as pairing him with cho or ginny, just not good!

oh another note, I have noticed some MINOR (very minor) grammar issues thoughout the chapters, they are few and they are largely the wrong tense (and the 'me and harry' or 'me and remus' -- backwards talk -- that you MIGHT be doing intentionally but I don't know, but I thought I would bring it to your attention so you are aware

I really like your story and hope you decide to finish it at some point.

i hope you start writing this story again. I have read it before, then stumbled across it again today...read the whole thing thourhg...please please don't abandon it!

I know Second Life is labeled as On Hold, but I just re-read the chapters you have, since I so enjoyed reading your new chapters in Green and Blue and GreenFair.

If you were so motivated to add to Second Life, I'd love to read it!

That theory on Time Travel is bonkers. lol Good chapter.

Good chapter.

Interesting!

Great story

Actually an excellent beginning!

great story and i cant wait till ur next update, but i was wondering about pairing's, i was thinking maybe evantonk's, because all the other girls in the story are far to young for evan, and as for harry i think hermione or luna would be best for him. anyway till ur next update ja ne

I recently re-read this story, and I enjoyed it just as much the second time around. I particularly like your descriptions, and the way you expand the wizarding world to include new things as they become necessary. The attention to detail is nice. Also, I enjoyed thinking about how things might turn out differently if this changed, or that was different, et cetera.

Please update if you ever feel in the mood. I hope you do.

P.S. For presents, I think Neville would enjoy pranking items. Maybe Remus could get him those? Harry might like new books to read. Maybe Harry could get his very own broom? They can afford one. Anyway, hope you write a new chapter soon.

I love it! I hope u plan on continuing the story again. I love ur characters! I like the plot to. Hopefully Harry's style taste will calm down before he gets to hogwarts though. If not he might make luna seem normal. Is there any possibility harry could meet luna before school? Meeting hermione would be suspicious since how did they know she was a witch and the weasleys are big light supporters but the lovegoods r eccetric enough they'd latch onto the inderdimension info if harry ever told him. Oh, i know u ask a couple chapters ago but the closest ive read to a non-gender witches and wizards is to use the term magicals. Anyways, i love ur story. Start writing it again because i'll definitely read it.

Why wouldn't he open the coffin with magic and just destroy the corpse? Then he could place the empty box back in the ground and Voldy would be none the wiser. Nasty trick, if I do say so myself. Too bad that while he was in Little Hangleton he didn't accidentally wander in the wrong direction first and find Gaunt's Shack. Then he'd have the resurrection stone and horcrux ring if he could survive the traps and curses. Great fic, making Neville so arrogant all the time is getting a bit old though. Harry'll end up in Ravenclaw, won't he, and Neville and Harry to Gryffindor? Or will Harry be Slytherin this time around? I don't think any of them will be Hufflepuffs, but if there was a house for arrogance, I'd guess it'd be mostly purebloods and I'm rambling. I have a similar affliction as Gwen and Harry. (Evan was once referred to as Harry, I'm guessing this because the young Harry wasn't nearby when he did whatever.) My brain and mouth aren't connected, the mouth moves of it's own accord. Gwen is a great charachter by the way, though the houses seem a bit too interwoven by her tales. So many details, I probably missed a few reading until 3am, but I couldn't stop! Please take the story off hold and find it in your heart to update for us. Us being the people who left 1,0+ reviews. That many can't all be wrong.

I know that it'ls been a long time since you updated but I really wish you would or give it to someone else who has more time. The plot is quite good, as is the writing.

I really love this story. I stumbled across it the other day just read it straight thru! I was so sad when I got to the last chapter and realized you had not updated in so long! I would really love to read more of this story! Let me know if you decide to continue this story. Great job by the way! I think that you should not do any pairing for Harry or Evan. I like it just fine. Looking forward to more!