Sorry I didn't review unreadable too, but I just wanted to stick with the momentum and keep reading. I'm very much enjoying this trilogy and always love to have OCs get with the strong x-men ladies. I look forward to your next one!

More, please more? Please continue this! You have an absolutely wonderful talent for imagery. I can imagine myself as Vivian, meeting this exotic, exotic, erotic women and falling head over heels in love. Although I have to ask that we get some more from someone else's point of view because I'm having a harder time imagining Vivian herself. Although I usually just decide that she looks like me so that I can imagine me and Betsy getting it on. :) At any rate, now that I'm done rambling I just have to repeat myself. Please? More, please?

I can only write that I think that this fic is a tremendous read. At the end of it all, I can only wish that there was more - just like a good book! Congrats on your excellent writing and good luck with whatever may come in the future. I'll be looking forward to the next installment of Betsy and Vivian's little adventure (or big one I should write seeing as now they've both come back from the dead)! ^_^

Great story :) I can't wait for the next one :)

you are very talented i love this fic:)

Great job writing this sequal, i cant wait for the third sequal!!

Nice sequal!

cool, i didnt expect that twist, Sinister's daughter? through, i wonder about Vivian death? her mutant power? or something else? anyway, great fic!

All I have to say Yimmy, is that you threw me for a loop when it turned out that it was not Shaw but SINISTER! As much as dislike Shaw, Sinister does to me what a beserker Rage does to Logan! IT MAKES ME WANT TO DESTROY HIM! At least now we know why he was after these two. And I wonder how John Constantine is going to keep them from being spotted by him again?

i like Vivian, her conversations, her thoughts and her personality is just funny and loveable. her conversation with her parents? interesting, to say the least, her thoughts on Evil Mutants as she put it? Just amusing that! do more, i like Vivian alot^^

Only 1 Review?
we can't have that
It was Wonderfull
can't wait for the final chapter

SHAW! You no good dirty rotten, (*#)(#*(#($(! (Sorry Yimmy, but Sebastian Shaw just rubs me the WRONG WAY!) You and Lady Mastermind HAD to insinuate yourselves into something that was a private matter, and ruin a perfectly good evening! I think its time a call was made to bring in some extra firepower to remind Shaw WHY you don't mess with the X!