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| Suadela 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was so cute. Their personalities were on the dot. Good job. I wonder if you have any more ideas with Kaito and Ai? |
| AiEdogawaIsaBellaCullen 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseAH! NO! Not the fish's revenge! ANYTHING BUT THAT! LOL KAITO! When did you learn that he was afraid of fish!?!?!?! I don't understand where everyone got that idea... LOL! Ai and Kaito! |
| Narumi Rhen 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis great! |
| Estrella85 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseVery amusing one-shot. I think it'd be interesting to see more of how Ai and Kid react to each other since they have such dif. personalities. ^_^ |
| famaifai 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abusebeyond awesome XD deserves more credit |
| YoshimiKurosaki 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseYoshimi- Thief! He stole a carton of milk! (Who steals something so dreadful? Blech!) Yoshimichi- You seem to not be taking this very well... Yoshimi- Pipe down! Yoshimichi- ...fish... Yoshimi- EEP! (jumps up on couch) Yoshimichi- (sigh) You always tend to have the same fears as these people... Yoshimi- Who? Yoshimichi- Never mind... -Yoshimi Kurosaki =Yoshimichi Kurosaki |
| warriorseadra 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abusesounds like something he would do, and aoko too... |
| Astarael00 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseStill good even on reread. XD But hey, what's this? You call her "Tsu" - wasn't that my nickname for her? - and me "astarael00". I'm injured, SN. Really. *pokes* |
| 10tative 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuselike the interaction between ai and kaito! more pls...? LOL |
| Miyano Ran 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseVery very nice! I'm putting this at my faves! How kind of Kaito to give Ai an extra free milk carton! Hm...now that I think of it, I think we ran out of milk in our house, too! OMG! I drank the last carton of milk this morning...I think? Anyway, loved your story!! And, now, I need to buy some milk...Lol...This is true!! I need to buy milk, too! |
| FS 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseSomehow I never paid attention to this when I read the story for the first time, but... KID stole one carton of milk for Ai! *gasp(You only wrote that Ai passed her mild to the cashier, not the Kudo-alike). XD The one-shot was fun. You should write more one-shots from time to time. |