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Suadela
2008-07-01
ch 1,
abuseThis was so cute. Their personalities were on the dot. Good job. I wonder if you have any more ideas with Kaito and Ai?
AiEdogawaIsaBellaCullen
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseAH!
NO!
Not the fish's revenge!
ANYTHING BUT THAT!
LOL
KAITO!
When did you learn that he was afraid of fish!?!?!?!
I don't understand where everyone got that idea...
LOL!
Ai and Kaito!
Narumi Rhen
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseThis great!
Estrella85
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseVery amusing one-shot. I think it'd be interesting to see more of how Ai and Kid react to each other since they have such dif. personalities. ^_^
famaifai
2008-03-23
ch 1, anon.
abusebeyond awesome XD deserves more credit
YoshimiKurosaki
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseYoshimi- Thief! He stole a carton of milk! (Who steals something so dreadful? Blech!)

Yoshimichi- You seem to not be taking this very well...

Yoshimi- Pipe down!

Yoshimichi- ...fish...

Yoshimi- EEP! (jumps up on couch)

Yoshimichi- (sigh) You always tend to have the same fears as these people...

Yoshimi- Who?

Yoshimichi- Never mind...

-Yoshimi Kurosaki
=Yoshimichi Kurosaki
warriorseadra
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abusesounds like something he would do, and aoko too...
Astarael00
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abuseStill good even on reread. XD

But hey, what's this? You call her "Tsu" - wasn't that my nickname for her? - and me "astarael00". I'm injured, SN. Really.

*pokes*
10tative
2007-05-22
ch 1,
abuselike the interaction between ai and kaito!
more pls...? LOL
Miyano Ran
2007-05-22
ch 1,
abuseVery very nice! I'm putting this at my faves! How kind of Kaito to give Ai an extra free milk carton! Hm...now that I think of it, I think we ran out of milk in our house, too! OMG! I drank the last carton of milk this morning...I think? Anyway, loved your story!! And, now, I need to buy some milk...Lol...This is true!! I need to buy milk, too!
FS
2007-05-21
ch 1,
abuseSomehow I never paid attention to this when I read the story for the first time, but... KID stole one carton of milk for Ai! *gasp(You only wrote that Ai passed her mild to the cashier, not the Kudo-alike). XD

The one-shot was fun. You should write more one-shots from time to time.
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