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kandita 4/24/12 . chapter 33
Very different...and I love every minute if it...you did a wonderful job writing this story

If the creator of naruto ever read this it would give him an idea for the ending of putting neji and Hinata 2gether, b/c it's obvious that he really do love her

You get 4 stars****

Job was nicely done
pvamangafan100 2/20/12 . chapter 33
I liked the story great job! ;)
Narutofan 1/31/12 . chapter 1
I kind of loved the story at first until the side characters became a bit too unrealistic to make Hinata more godly. For example, you made all the guys love Hinata.

Kiba, I can understand to an extent because they are teammates.

Wave boy...okay.

But Naruto? He has this undying love towards Sakura. It's just too conveniently made for the sake of making Hinata like a goddess.

Hinata is cool as she is. She doesn't need to get affection from Naruto to become a great kunoichi. You conveniently using side characters to make Hinata shine makes me think that you can't show the awesomeness of the cannon Hinata just the way it is.
shikamaru-syndrome 1/28/12 . chapter 1
This is the best NejiHina story I've ever read! I love it! I showed my friend who wasn't a NejiHina fan your fic and she loved it too! It was very well written so good job!
Ms. Amateur 1/25/12 . chapter 33
w0.0w! man you're good! damn it i wish i could be half as good as you are! thanx for an amazing story. i never ever thought of "nehina" until this story. i mean i always thought he liked her when he had called her pretty in the manga/anime but that idea got side-tracked when i started reading all these sasuhina, itahina and gaahina fics where he was only portrayed as an over-protective sibling. i'm glad you wrote this and i'm even more pleased that i read it! thanx again! really looking forward to reading some of your other stories! keep up the awesumness! 3
Ms. Amateur 1/25/12 . chapter 32
man the rookies have a complicated luv lyf for sure! lol! great chap.
Ms. Amateur 1/25/12 . chapter 30
woohoo! and as always i love your writing. everything, every line, every para, seems to be a whole complete thing. if ya know what i mean. i love your style and your ideas. 3
Ms. Amateur 1/25/12 . chapter 28
i swear if i could murder those bleemin' elders, i would! ugh!
Ms. Amateur 1/25/12 . chapter 25
yay! it's gotten so much more interesting! i love the bits when you put them both together!
Ms. Amateur 1/24/12 . chapter 22
thank goodness naruto is out of the pic and it's good he found someone. and what is neji thinking? that dobe!
Ms. Amateur 1/24/12 . chapter 21
finally he's coming to his senses! that nutter
Ms. Amateur 1/24/12 . chapter 19
! :(
Ms. Amateur 1/24/12 . chapter 18
i hate those elders! bleedin jerks!
Ms. Amateur 1/24/12 . chapter 17
Yay! for hinata's moment
Ms. Amateur 1/24/12 . chapter 16
me god! that eiji is one freak! he reminds me of golem from

LOTR.
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