does the vase symbolize her role in her family she in a way is like a trophy wife im not sure. u should update this story

Oh, things are moving along quite nicely. The chemistry between Naruto and Hinata are amazing. I love how you make Hinata prim while still keeping her in character (read: insecure;) it's quite an impressive feat. All the characters are pretty intriguing, as is the plot. A satisfying chapter overall--can't wait for the next! And to find out where the Uchiha come in.

One quick thing--now that all the characters have middle names, I wouldn't mention them. It's a nice way of establishing the AU, but it'll sound awkward overused. You haven't done it yet: just a caution. That's all the constructive criticism that I can think of, which is a good bit of praise in itself :)

I really enjoyed reading your story. It's really good. This is the second time i've read a story where the setting was in an old fashioned victorian type era. And both are very good. I think it's very original and unique. Plz update soon and keep up the good work!

naruto was so close! damn society. anyways UPDATE!

Firstly,corrections on chapter four:

I just realized... I am nothing like what they want *be to be.

-a typographical error dear, it should be *me.

"It is nothing of *import, my lord." She said,"
"Nothing of *import." Naruto repeated. ."

-for both lines-sentences.. is this intended to be that way? if not, it should be *of importance. and if intended, may i suggest that you use "importance" instead of "import" because it might confuse the readers though it is understandable once read.

Secondly, i like your use of imagery. i believe that at those times or of that certain era, imagery is "overused". your story really sounds and looks like as if it is in that era. the imagery and lovely choice of words draws the readers to the world of that time. i believe that you have done quite a research. good job on that. and may i recommend the "Silver Wolf" by Alice Borchardt. the author used much imagery and it might help inspire you.

and lastly, i agree with the NaruHina tandem. they look better. and honestly, the way Hinata speaks or acts reminds me of you dear.

great job "L"!

Yay!! You're back!

This is a great chapter!

gee... i was about to say that you write "short" chapters and then you wrote and posted this chapter! haha! gee... i was about to say "where's the mystery in this romance/mystery fic?" and there YOU GO. lol! it was as if you read my mind.

wow. everyone is so stuck up! lol! and i mean that in a very good way... at first i thought it was odd to have a 'victorian/england setting for this anmie. but, damn good job! you really made the characters (naruto and sakura) 'fit' the setting... the restrictions of the time. the 'propriety'...
ah, personally, i think that the reason why naruto's saying/thinking those things about sakura is because he's still hurting. aww... lol.

hullo! nice start... ah, you had some VERY minor errors- "Naruto's eyes never left the dark-haired girl and was drawn to the chastised dark haired pianist…". it makes sense if you "edit out" the errors in your head, but, correct that, alright?
ino has a brother? something you made up? interesting...

I absolutely adore the story!

please update love this fic. really love Sakura too

It's great!
I can picture the atmoshere, and the characters are vividly described
THank you!

great story things seem to be going well till next time later

this is very good. i hope you update soon.

I like it I never read much anything other than fan-fiction but dare I say this is good till next time later