 Pink Illusion 2007-11-07 . chapter 1These were all so cute, even though they did have the nasty habit of changing tenses occasionally. They were fantastic! |
 Rabid Squirrel 2007-08-27 . chapter 1 Whenever I need a good dose of well-written NaruIno fics, I can always count on you. :D
I love the way you write the dynamics of their relationship. |
 TheWatcherandReader 2007-08-16 . chapter 1I like this. I like it a lot. Keep on updating. |
 braindamage730 2007-07-07 . chapter 1i like that ! |
 Ibozun 2007-05-22 . chapter 1It's very short but really interesting nonetheless and I enjoyed it (as i have all your works). Great job
Ibozun |
 the grey mage 2007-05-22 . chapter 1meh. |
 gof22 2007-05-22 . chapter 1I love these drabbles. They are great. You are an excellent writer. I did not understand what Ino wanted Naruto to stop doing to himself though in the Possessive drabble when Naruto said he couldn't stop. Will you be posting more drabbles. It would be cool to see you make one where Sakura is thinking about how she was to late to get Naruto to fall in love with her. |
 Dark Hope Assassin 2007-05-21 . chapter 1I loved the last line of Possessive and I definitely liked the idea. Ino indeed seems like someone who would rather not share any of her things with anyone, especially her man, indeed. The whole drabble was rather affecting but the last line definitely did it for me. It was positively great.
The Mirror story was also quite interesting, especially with the fact that Naruto likes to see his reflection cracked but not exactly falling apart. Happy angst indeed. You managed that one perfectly well.
The Violets thing is rather cute too, thought not as powerful as the previous ones. But, once more, there's your genius at work with the wonderful descriptions and elaborate conversing of the reader with the characters, so yeah, it was good as well. ^^
I liked how you had her practically kill herself by smoking too much in Cigarettes. It was really heart-breaking to see her do something like that to herself and how Naruto can't help her out of it and finally, how he takes up the smoke himself. Truly tragic and most wonderful to feast upon. Very nice!
But the last drabble, Faith, is definitely my most favourite one from these five, because it has interactions--verbal such--between the characters, it has humor and a serious streak and it has anything anyone could want. Very good, very good. I liked them all so much and I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve for such drabbles!
Yours sincerely,
Dark Hope Assassin |
 Remusscarface 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Short and sweet! Good job! |
 Kyo Tetsuei 2007-05-21 . chapter 1You're back! We've all missed you. These were touching, albeit a bit morbid at times, but that in itself carries a touch of realism that is refreshing. Definitely of a quality that we as your fans come to expect. Thank you! |
 keyblade-03 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Awesome job, very well done. The agnst, drama, and cute humor are all done really well. I really hope to continue this, because it was very enjoyable to enjoyable read all these short shots. Again you really well with this so please keep it up. I hope you update really soon.
Keyblade |
 FenrisLupus 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Love your NaruIno stuff. Always thought you covered the huge gaping gaps that is Canon Ino's character with style. you give Naruto and Ino a certain spunk that is just loveable. While in fics that include only two people, this is no problem, do try and watch yourself so not everyone gets that spunky reply character trait.
I always felt its easy to let your personality leak over to the characters, and while I think you carry yourself wonderfully in the multicharacter/mutlichapter fics, all the main characters do tend to get that "awesome comeback" trait. Though nothing in this particular one though, since as I said, it only had two characters who seems to get a fitting dynamic character interaction from it.
I also enjoy your mix between overly-dramatic-borderline-"emo" and humor, like the "Naruto smiled, before continued shaving with the same contented grin on his face.
His reflection had finally seemed to be more like him." While the whole "oh I'm faulty" thing is a bit dramaqueen-ish, you defuse that situation with having him "grin with content". I enjoy that.
Not a crappy drabble at all, I think it's rather... err... "cute"? Dunno, some positive adjective, at least. I hope I'll see more of that NaruIno awesomeness you bring. Been following what you've written for quite a bit now. Cheerio!No offense on the criticism, just like adding a bit of good and bad with my reviews, it's not nearly as bad as it might seem, just struggling for something to mention here! : ) |
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